I'm sorry, but this wasn't really that good to me. Multiple grammatical errors, wrong use of punctuation at times, and a very short chapter really hurt the concept of this. (Chapter Rating: 4/10)
Go learn to use grammar properly you fucking idiot go fuck yourself.Rating: FUCKING CRAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Best story 10/10
I'm sorry, but this wasn't really that good to me. Multiple grammatical errors, wrong use of punctuation at times, and a very short chapter really hurt the concept of this. (Chapter Rating: 4/10)
Go learn to use grammar properly you fucking idiot go fuck yourself.
Rating: FUCKING CRAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Best story 10/10