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Ink Ribbon - Vraddock
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Saw this on G4, glad to see it here!
*Looks at the score* (-11 +2)
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Folks, I now officially call whomever constantly downvotes vore stories and downvoted this MASTERPIECE just out of spite to the genre a COMPLETE RETARD. That is all, dismissed.
I read this already, too. It's a really well-written story I hope it gets a flood of up votes.
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Heh, thanks, all of you. Been considering doing this for a while, and I'll be posting the others over the next couple weeks, mostly just to see what kind of feedback I could garner.
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Well, it's better than MOST fatal vore stories on this site. I will say that. And surprisingly detailed. MOST of the characters are in character, so even though this is personally not my particular strain of fetish...I guess this is okay. It's not my thing, but it at least is trying to be more.
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Thank you! If you don't mind me asking, who's not really in character?
This is a good story, my friend. Normally I'm not into fatal vore stories. But I'll be more than willing to make an exception in this case.
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Fluttershy wanting to kill herself like this sort of feels off, but that's about it. And it IS her fetish in the story, so...
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Well, I may have been projecting a little bit. But even if I could, I probably wouldn't do it, so... story!
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There really isn't any other way to have willing fatal vore without a character wanting it... Personally I found descriptions of Fluttershy's motivation in this story spot-on and very close to what I myself felt a few times. The fact that descriptions and whole fanfic are so eloquent and well-written only helps make it seem real.
To you the behavior might look out-of-character as this is opposite to your fetish and you can't understand or relate to the character.
The only alternative to having Fluttershy willingly condemn herself to death would be to force it on her, which would get tons more hate (even from you, in which I'm certain) for being "needlessly cruel to lovable characters"... The very same thing against which you are "crusading" all hard and fatal vore stories.
So, unless you suggest a better solution, I don't really see what else you might be asking of this story. It is almost perfect and the only issue I saw with it has been already discussed with the author and will be rectified it in the future works.
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Sky? Appreciate what you're doin', I honestly do... But don't worry about it. He said his opinion, I asked what could be improved, and he answered. There's no need for anything else.
If he doesn't like it, that's fine. I don't know his preferences, be they emotional or sexual. It's just that this wasn't quite a match for him.
And that's fine. Don't be the one guy shouting his argument if the other guy is walking away. Because that's not an argument at all.
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Wasn't really going for an argument. I've just seen his comment a few hours ago and it got me genuinely curious as to what can be improved and his earlier reply just didn't give me enough data. I'm not shouting he is wrong or not allowed to think what he does, just trying to understand what it is exactly he wants to see in a perfect fatal vore story and how Fluttershy's motivation can be improved. Right now it's just pure curiosity mixed with the tiniest bit of annoyance at him omitting direct answers as to what can be improved and how exactly it is off.
If I were to criticize something, I would have a clear list of what I liked and disliked about the thing with examples backing up each of my statements... That's why the manner in which he makes his "critique" just annoys me somewhat. It is never anything concrete or substantial, always some vague accusations or definitions with no real proof other than his own words =\
I'm pretty sure that it is me who is responsible for bringing him here by mentioning this story as a perfect example of high-quality vore that should fit his ridiculously high expectations for fetish clop. Sorry for that by the way... In any case, that's why it is only natural I want to know his full reaction and opinion about it now that he read it, especially after he mentioned his distaste with its character behavior back in the other thread without giving any explanation whatsoever before running off... Seeing exactly the same claims with no support here is just sad and annoying at the same time.
In all honesty, it is a bit of an ongoing debate for us and I'm still trying to understand his point of view to further prove or disprove my own assumptions in case we inevitably meet in the future. Two previous confrontations (started not by me, mind you) has proven that I need to do some research so that the next time he does the same stupid thing by not allowing others like whatever they like, I won't have to repeat myself word-in-word.
I understand that you are following a benign-neutral stance by allowing everyone do whatever they wish and it is totally awesome if you ask me. I, on the other hand, just can't stand when people say mean things or accuse someone or something without giving any proof or even explaining the reasoning why they do it. If you are going to leave a negative review on something, at least bother with giving as much information as you can about why you did it. How is the author supposed to fix the issue and become better if all you say is "Meh, I didn't like how X acted in the fic"?
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No, it's because she's my favorite and her doing this just kind of out if the blue doesn't quite fit her. It would make more sense if she was, like, stuck in the wilderness and came across a starving animal about to die without food so she offers herself.
That was so cool. I really love vore and it is somehow sweet how Fluttershy enjoys herself in the snake's guts and what preparations she makes. Also that Lyra and Zecora understand her is great.
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Heh, funny story, I actually was very, very worried that I'd put in too much setup. But when I was doing it, it felt right... And I'm glad that instinct seems to be correct.
(I still put in the lobster, just in case, though.)
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No problem. I think, you did it just right. Not to much and not to less. I really like your writing style in that one.
Oh no, not doing this again...
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Heh. Someone link you these, or just come here by yourself?
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Both. A past link that I checked out for the first one. Looked at your other stories and saw this one. I'll just back away slowly...
Only issue I have with this is that snakes always always ALWAYS start with the head. No snake would ever eat a creature like this.
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Really? Didn't know that. I'll make a note of it somewhere.
i have never fully understood Death fetishes, specifically when one wishes to experience a given death themselves. no matter what, even if they give in to this fetish, they can only try it once...being a creature of Logic myself, i simply cannot see anything logical about the fetish, and this leaves me feeling very confused when i find it written about...
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Personally, I wrote this because the idea was erotic, and I can keep coming back to this, unlike actually going through all the legal and financial rigmarole of finding, buying, and training a snake to eat me. Also, so I wouldn't die.
If you mean "why is this even a fetish", then I'm afraid I got nothing. I just find it hot, is all.
This was an awesome story!! ^.^ Plus it opens up to the possibility of a sequal with Lyra being eaten too. owo
I've written a vore story similar to this involving my Fox Fursona. ^_^
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Thanks for the favourite! And yup, gotta have that sequel hook! (Also I need to start working on that, heh)
7072700 Heehe, I look forward to reading it. ^.^
6466187 I like death fetishes specifically because you can only die once (unless you are a Timelord or James Bond). Something is undeniably hot to me about the unique experience that is giving someone that. It's much the same reason that virginity is so fetishized in today's society. It can only be given once.
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Fetishes aren't logical; they're emotional. So if you're wondering why anyone can enjoy this sort of thing, the answer has to do with a complex interplay of brain chemicals.
Imagining a given situation is not the same thing as carrying it out; in the case of writing a death fetish, you get most of the pleasure without any of the death, so it's actually pretty logical to do so.
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Good sir,
I am into some seriously weird shit. And I mean that. I'm into scat, and vore, and all the others, but this was one of the most disgusting, and horrible fics I have read in a long, long time...
...And yet, I really liked it.
It was very well detailed, followed a good story line, and could actually be believable. If it were much longer, it would work as a book. But as a fanfiction, though not going in my favourites, it stands as one of my favourite fetish fics. Good job
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Thank ya!
Can we please get a Lyra chapter? Maybe a sequel?
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coughs awkwardly
Uhh. I'm just gonna say yes, eventually. One's in the works. (I wish I wasn't such a slow damn writer)
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me too, man. Me too
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In light of this, I take it the sequel is off, at least for the foreseeable future?
Before reading question,
How graphic is the gore/digestion?
Did you just add it to be safe, or is it some really dark gore?
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Pretty dark, but Fluttershy's into it. If it puts you off, then probably better to err on the side of caution. If you still want to read the story, however, it's all fairly limited to one section; when Lyra goes downstairs. Either skip that section or be ready to skip some paragraphs there, and you should be fine.
I wonder whether Ponythroat influenced this (via Derpi image 774086), or you both just took inspiration from Katie Cook.
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Who was among MLP artists, lol.