There is a legend about a tree that can bear a fruit of pure gold. Capable of granting the consumer ultimate power. Guarded by the creature known as the first consumer, this "forbidden," fruit has drawn the eyes of many and claimed the lives of many more. Not one person has managed to gain the power of the fruit. Legends swirl around the golden fruit such as the name of the place the fruit is said to grow. Equestria.
Taking the fruit would mean the end of the world, sparking a war between the bearer of the fruit and those determined to keep the fruit from falling into the wrong hands. One cursed warrior is determined to challenge these guardians, take the fruit and be granted the ultimate power himself.
Chapters (24)
what this crossover is bout?
6329147 i think kamen rider gaim
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you would think right friend
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Look for Kamen rider Gaim and Lockseeds, you'll get the picture soon enough dude
Curious to see where this crossover goes.
P.S. This crossover is with Gaim, as the fruit is refereed to as both the "Golden Fruit" and "Forbidden Fruit."
This story is very well written, the only problem I can see is that you should indent your paragraphs, it makes it a bit easier to read.
Other then that though, it keeps my attention very well and is good all around.
6329266 I'm know it
I would suggest you try and make your chapter at least 1 thousand words. For me, I always make my chapters around 1300 words. It just makes you feel good inside to know you got over a thousand words, ya know?
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thanks for the tip. Though this first chapter was intended to be short
6333173 Understandable.
Just to ask, is this a random human with Ryoma's Sengoku Driver and Lemon Lockseed?
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yes i couldn't get the characters to work write when i tried the first time to write this story so i am using my own characters
hope thats okay
though ryoma in equestria....dunno how to feel about that lol
6335953 That's fine, I would do that as well.
6335953 Also, why Duke Lemon Arms?
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Namely because I liked the way it sounds when duke actually uses it in the tv show
My second fave was dragonfruit energy followed by the ringo lockseed
6339747 Thanks
love the new profile picture
this story is doing good. Your getting better at your words and the story is still holding my attention. Very good indeed.
Ok, I've read through this so far. Your style and writing improve with each chapter. However, the pacing, and even the structure of your Kamen Rider Duke feel pretty weak. It's this lack of real build-up with his character, or at least more getting into his head, that makes the end of this chapter feel kinda flat.
Not to say this story is bad, far from it. But there is much to be improved upon. That said, had a similar idea myself, if you're interested, I'd like a second opinion and would send my idea over PM.
Good work and keep going.
The only problem I see about this chapter is that, in the beginning it sais that twilight noticed Discords blackened eyes and twisted lion paw. And then when she nears Discord she can see that his horn was snapped off. How does one not notice a snapped off horn the size of Discords first and instead notices a small twisted paw? And your grammar still needs to get better.
But other then that, this story still holds my attention and I will continue to read it. And you are definitely getting better at your writing. Keep up the good work.
Might I recommend writing without all the italics. It just makes it easier to read, also, good chapter!
I am telling you mate. This is so hard to read, I am asking you to please split the paragraphs up. They don't look like they belong here.
Ok I am really loving this story here,
and I also wonder who was that pony, who hurt Shadows Marefriend Rainbow Dash? Why did he let Trixie escape? What will Jay do about Twilight? WHY IS DISCORD HERE?? 
(sorry for my outburst
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Well that's all I have of questions. Also awesome job here my friend,
and good luck on the next chapters. 
Why'd you stop working on this story?