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Carrot Cake finally gets the chance to tell Cup Cake how he feels! But some weasels are on a date too, and it'll be up to Carrot Cake to not only tell Cup Cake how he feels as suavely as he can, but to also help the weasels enjoy their dates too!
MLP x Rhythm Heaven Fever Crossover!
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I think this was a good story, and for being some of your first written stuff like this, I think it was great!
The way the crossover worked was done really well too, methinks; the way I see it, I'm not sure if it could have been done better.
Overall, I have nothing as far as I can see to criticise, just keep it up, it was a sweet and perfectly long story.
This was pretty good. Kind of disappointed there's a lack of Rhythm Heaven x My Little Pony fanfictions out there... I might just make one after reading this.