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Rainbow Dash talks about how she and Tank stood up to a crazed pony who was bent on stopping winter. For the sake of all of Ponyville, the two friends infiltrate the Cloudsdale factory, braving the new security and unknown danger from an intruder.
What? No, this totally happened. Rainbow Dash said so.

Written for EQD's Writer's Training Grounds: "Tanks for the Memories"

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Game of thrones much?

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That's actually what I was trying to go for! I was thinking, 'Okay. Rainbow would want to make this sound like a Daring Do adventure. Cheesy villain and everything.' Glad that you noticed that. :twilightsmile:

I do believe I shall switch that area around too, as you suggested.

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Surprisingly, I have never seen a single episode of that series.
But yes, that, or at least its meme, may have possibly been in my head when I was writing that line over and over. And over. :raritywink:

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The yes. All of the yes.

I was actually going to have them ask a lot more questions at the end--even Scootaloo--but I didn't want them to come off as picky and annoying. Just curious little fillies.

6305087 haha! Another reference spotted first

This was a fun little story.
Sometimes I wish the show would have "follow-up" episodes, which would basically be anthologies that would go into a bit of detail about what happened after regular episodes.

The first one I'd love to see would follow up on these episodes:
"Tanks for the Memories" with something like this.
"Filli Vanilli" with a conversation between Pinkie and Fluttershy.
"Mare Do Well" with a conversation between Rainbow and Scootaloo.

6409781 I can agree with that. There have been a few episodes where I have wanted to know what happens afterward. One of the ones that has been nagging me for a bit now is "Amending Fences." Not because I want to see what happened to Moondancer, but because I want to see Twilight go talk with Lyra now.
And since, in my head, Lyra and Bon Bon are married, I think that would be amusing. I've actually been considering writing a story about it.

6412255 That would definitely be interesting to see.

As for Lyra and Bon Bon being married... yeah, that actually works.
And I'd love to read that story

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