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l3ladeRunner


Almost newly started fan fiction writer and non-entity I suffer from severe imposter sundrom, so try not to be too harsh ;) Criticism is greatly appreciated, no matter what kind.

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Democracy has been introduced to Equestria. But the alien concept didn't work for the ponies and now Equestria is at an all out civil war between The Solar Empire and The New Lunar Republic.
After three years of endless fighting, everypony is tired and just wants it to end. And now the end might actually be close...
When news of a third party reaches the two princesses, they send their most trusted officers to figure out who they are and if they can help win the war... Twilight, Applejack and Flyttershy from The Solar Empire and Rainbow Dash, Pinkie Pie and Rarity from The New Lunar Republic.
Now the six (former) friends go on their quest to find the strange third party and hopefully bring the war to an end...

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 7 )

Celestia's dialogue feels out of place. She sounds too much like Luna (Celestia= Colloquial Language, and Luna= Royal Canterlot dialect)

But hey, s'alright :pinkiehappy:

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Thank you very much :pinkiehappy:
Mostly the shift in dialects are intended. I hope chapter three will clear things up :twilightsmile:

No, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no. AJ goes on the N.L.R. side and Rarity goes to the S.E. Such a fine pony as Applejack would not ally herself with the likes of the S.E.

Where's the communist and conservatives? Haha. Anyways, I'm enjoying this fic. Favorited it and now here's a thumb's up.

S.E. seems like it is the communists...but they are socialists, which means that they aren't communists. By the way socialism is not part of Democracy.....socialism is its own government, same as communism.

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