I'll update this when I feel like it, no time right now.
A human gets into Equestria. But can he deal with the guilt when he thinks he is corrupting their world, and ripping apart their universe? And humans were never meant to handle magic, so what will this do to him? Find out in this emotional roller coaster of a story!
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Wow. I looked on the homepage and it showed this story. With 17 chapters...
Time to read! 
I will not read it. I won't. I'm sorry.
The problem I think you really need to fix is the spelling in the description, and the spelling overall.
Their is misspelled twice and the word 'rollercoaster' (which is also misspelled) would be better spaced apart, like this: Roller Coaster.
I have not even begun to tell you how cliche' this kind of story is, but I'm hoping you will be able to fix the things I have found wrong and fix any other mistakes you could have included in the story and at least make it look better. Like unnecessary uppercase and lowercase letters. Or anything of that nature.
I hope you found this helpful and good luck with your story.
Really? Earth-rim? BWAHAHAHAH!
Oh, that's just rich.
Another human in equestria story.....great.
the story is making more sense, but the grammar and spelling mistakes really annoy me.
this is SOOOOOOO confusing.