Parents of Ponyville

This story is a sequel to Diamond and Silver's Excellent Adventure

The time has come for Cheerilee to have a series of rational, dignified, and logical discussions with parents regarding the behavior, grades, and general academic performance of their children. Surely these parent-teacher conferences will go smoothly, with nary a shenanigan or hijink in sight.

That's what Cheerilee tells herself, anyway.

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Telaros

Telaros #1 · Jul 28th, 2015 · 1 · ·

I can't tell if that guitar scene was real or exaggerated in the story. But either way, it's a shame you didn't have other ponies reacting to the guitar playing. Poke more fun about the shame part with each saying something to express the shame they felt? xD

The crazy really escalated mid-way. The AJ and Big Mac parents thing, ha! Nice one on Big Mac pulling that silly story out of his backside. lol

Freaking Tree Hugger. lol Her medineighting is so silly. Tree Hugger is literally off the wagon in this story. xD

Nice bit with Luna. Diamond Tiara may be a D student, but she's an adorable Teacher's Pet who does her best to get away with murder. Not that any pony was killed by her in this story... That we know of.

Meta Four

Meta Four #2 · Jul 29th, 2015 · 2 · ·

I really like the fact that Silver Spoon was a changeling all along. It makes her early scene with Diamond Tiara retroactively funnier—SS knows all about disguises, so she probably could have made something actually convincing, but somehow she got roped into wearing a crappy disguise anyway.

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I can't tell if that guitar scene was real or exaggerated in the story.

I like the ambiguity.

But either way, it's a shame you didn't have other ponies reacting to the guitar playing. Poke more fun about the shame part with each saying something to express the shame they felt? xD

Well, the whole scene is blatant wish-fulfillment for Scoots (wish-fulfillment that may or may not have actually happened). Scoots doesn't want to shame anypony besides DT and SS, so if I had shown anypony else's reaction, those reactions would have been something besides shame.

Now that you mention it, I really should have shown Rainbow Dash's reaction. Huge mistake on my part, not including that. It would have gone something like this:

Five miles in the other other direction, Rainbow Dash also heard Scootaloo's laser guitar solo. She paused her speed and agility training so she could wipe the liquid pride out of her eyes. "Atta girl, Scoots," she said.

The crazy really escalated mid-way.

Ha, yeah. The funny thing is, we tried to scale back a bit for this story. After we wrote Diamond and Silver's Excellent Adventure, we knew that trying to top that craziness would just make us crash and burn. We picked a more down-to-earth premise, and added a rule along the lines of "No one can write anything that would prevent the next person from continuing the conferences."

Yami Vizzini

Yami Vizzini #3 · Jul 29th, 2015 · · ·

For a moment, I was certain Sunny Daze's "new friend" was a tablet.

Telaros

Telaros #4 · Jul 29th, 2015 · 1 · ·

6257617 lol! You would have set Fimfiction ablaze trying to top the craziness of the last story. xD

Yeah, loved the ambiquity of the story. I have to say it was easier to follow at least. Except that zapping that one colt did that I'm not sure if he turned back time or what.

You guys made a cute collab. Can't wait to see what other zany things you all churn out.

Rhanoa