Pinkie Pie Organizes the Library

Twilight wants to reorganize the library again. Pinkie volunteers to help, despite her rather unorthodox classification system.

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i_am_the_jam

i_am_the_jam #1 · Jul 14th, 2015 · 2 · ·

Well, that was unexpected...

SafariJohn

SafariJohn #2 · Jul 14th, 2015 · 3 · ·

I think that qualifies as a double bait and switch.

Butterwings

Butterwings #3 · Jul 14th, 2015 · 2 · ·

but it has seven different paragraphs without the letter ‘e’,

HOW, and who the hell has time to specifically leave out that letter for SEVEN paragraphs.

Muses and Daydreams

Muses and Daydreams #4 · Jul 15th, 2015 · 2 · ·

Great story! Pinkie and Twilight were in character (also, props for keeping Pinkie in character, several great writers say they have difficulty with it) and the ending, while unexpected, fit PERFECTLY. The only thing I can fault you on is the writing itself, as the end passage

'Twilight glanced dejectedly at the ground. She hadn’t meant to get so frustrated with Pinkie Pie. After all, Pinkie was just trying to help. But organizing the library was a task that demanded logic and precision, and neither quality had anything to do with Pinkie Pie. As much as Twilight enjoyed Pinkie’s craziness, this really was a task that needed to be done by somepony who was organized, meticulous, and rational.'

could have been written in a less tedious way, but it doesn't really detract from the story. Good job!

dragonjek

dragonjek #5 · Jul 15th, 2015 · · ·

The books were perfectly arranged alphabetically by author.

How the hell did that happen?

GamerGoddessDin

GamerGoddessDin #6 · Jul 15th, 2015 · 3 · ·

6209267 It's Pinkie Pie, don't question it.

The Engineer Pony

The Engineer Pony #7 · Jul 15th, 2015 · 2 · ·

6206372

Thanks for your input. I'm glad you think that I got Pinkie Pie right. I also appreciate the critique on my writing. I do tend to get wordy and repetitive at times, which is something I'll try to keep in mind in the future.

silverMEGAlicorn

silverMEGAlicorn #8 · Jul 16th, 2015 · 3 · ·

What I'm more freaked out about is the fact that you managed to come up with these organization concepts and drills and it only makes sense because Pinkie!

theportalmasters

theportalmasters #9 · Jul 16th, 2015 · 1 · ·

Finally, Twilight managed to regain a hold on her sanity long enough to speak up. “Pinkie, how can this possibly an organization system? It makes no sense!”

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