Pinkie's Off Day

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Pinkie Pie has always been the liveliest pony in Ponyville. Spreading cheer and throwing parties has always come naturally to her. So what will she do on a day when she just doesn't feel happy?

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Unhappy · 30th Dec 2015 · 1,741 words
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Unsuccessful · 30th Dec 2015 · 2,062 words
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Unbreakable · 30th Dec 2015 · 2,299 words
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Shamrock95

Shamrock95 #1 · Dec 30th, 2015 · · · Unbreakable ·

Awww, how sweet.

HiddenMaster

HiddenMaster #2 · Jan 1st, 2016 · 2 · · Unbreakable ·

Ah, that was sweet.

Relatively short, but Pinkie was characterized exceedingly well here, and the issue explored-days where you just can't be your typical self-was done very well. And the end was sweet enough to make up for the heartache of the thought of a depressed Pinkie.

Well done.

HiddenMaster out

DMakkam

DMakkam #3 · May 11th, 2016 · · · Unhappy ·

Lastly, she pulled a balloon out of her mane, inflated it with a single, mighty breath, and swapped it for the sinking balloon on her bedpost.

I imagine that the balloon she used to replace it floats and Pinkie was the one who inflated it by blowing into it. Now you got me thinking that she breathes out helium...

Now you got me thinking of why Pinkie's voice is high pitched or what would happen if Pinkie speaks with helium breath...

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