• Member Since 13th Jul, 2015
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Trilingualpony


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A new idea is created by a pony name Marx Kolat, in his book "social revolution" many ponies talk about it, until princess celestia decides to enable some laws following the ideas in the book. But her sister dissagrees, and it look's like she isn't the only one.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 4 )

Good evening Trilingualpony!
Wow, that's an amazing idear! It's something new, something catchy! But, please, check your grammar. I know it's hard to always keep the grammar in mind but please try.
Hope a new chapter is in working process!
Fluddy Pirate

6332793 Dear fluddy pirate, first of all thank you for liking the story, and yes i am aware that my grammar isn't the best, i am french and i only had 4 years of english. And yes i am working on the next chapter, but it will take a bit of time as i want to make it much longer then the first one.

Take your time. Good things need time.
I'm not an english either. I'm from Germany.
With which programm do you write your story? Maybe you can search for that programm an english corrector that can correct your work. :twilightsmile:
Have a nice day!
Fluddy Pirate

6335470 i will try to find an english correcter. And you're german? i live in the german border region of france so i can speak german so that's cool. good evening to you too, even if at the time of me writing thid message it's like 11 am.

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