A guy dressed up as Shredder has a high-flying adventure in Equestria that comes to an abrupt end.
This is a short, silly thing I created for this contest.
This story now has a YouTube reading, courtesy of ZeusMacD.
Chapters (1)
Palm Palette
Joined 19th Sep, 2013 ·
Offline
Also LikedSimilarAuthor
- Philosophysics · 3.8k words · 21 2 · 773 views
Join our SubscribeStar to remove these adverts!
Join our SubscribeStar to remove these adverts!
Stats
Page generated in 0.116 seconds
Total duration
785 users online
737,028 hits today, 2,139,894 yesterday
FIMFiction
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Follow & Support Us
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
...Huh, by Displaced standards this was actually rather sweet and heartwarming.
stupid and messy, but in a sweet, heartwarming way.
Why'd you chose this description for Dash?
Well i think you just broke the record for shortest HIE story. At least in terms of how long the human lasted.
6200582 indeed! This was short and interesting, though its ending was kind of less absurd than the rest of it, which felt a bit off.
Still, worthy of an upvote.
And the moral of the story is: never cosplay as Shredder.
The second lesson is, always throw a coin before passing through a portal.
You can always watch if the coin remains grounded, or if it passes through.
Also, do NOT mess with a cop's car.
Thumb's up for the unusual premise, and favorited 'cause it was a good parody of the whole HiE and Displaced genres.