An ancient threat is clandestinely massing across the world as Rarity and Spike seek for answers to his mysterious past; however, their journey leads to something much larger than they anticipated, something that will change Equestria forever.
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Another great chapter I await the next one.
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Thank you very much. I thought Pinkie would be a good character to help Spike along as well. She just has that sort of spirit, I suppose. My favourite part of chapter 4 actually was when Pinkie said, "I'm looking at you, I just don't see what the problem is". I thought that was such a good line for her to have, because I believe she wouldn't care what anypony looked like as long as they were nice.
And thank you for complimenting my vocabulary as well. I take words and phrases from authors like J.R.R. Tolkien and George R.R. Martin to make the story sound more like an actual novel. Spike has been an ambassador for over two years at this point, and should have a more refined manner of speaking just like Rarity. I also just really love finding more complex words to put in my stories. I also hope you have enjoyed the last four chapters as much as this one. Have you checked out the drawings on my Deviantart profile? It's under the same name.
Thank you once again (finally some helpful comments xD) and I look forward to reading about the reaction to one of my personal favourite chapters next Sunday. Have a splendid afternoon! Ta ta! ^^
Cake Twins do care about Spike.
That was a very sweet chapter. I not only enjoyed your characterization of Pinkie, I appreciate your approach of her maturing a little bit, even to the point of staying out of the way while Spike reconnected with the denizens of Ponyville.
You haven’t built up much tension in your plot yet, save for what is going on in Spike’s head. I’m curious to see how that will change.
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Oh, thank you. I do think that this is what Pinkie would do if given the chance. She is a very complicated character, but her only wish is to be helpful. Now she purely has more ways to bring cheer to others, so to speak.
That is subtle in these chapters. It is mostly about the characters. You are only looking at the chapter from one character's perspective. You have Spike's thoughts, but you have to cast some supposition in regard to what Pinkie is thinking and feeling. I hope that you like chapter eight, my dear. It is certainly one of my favorites.