An ancient threat is clandestinely massing across the world as Rarity and Spike seek for answers to his mysterious past; however, their journey leads to something much larger than they anticipated, something that will change Equestria forever.
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We can't find Spike and Rarity!
Honest I didn't have anything to do with them! Ask the Doctor!
Look in the nearest motel six, they left the light on!
Maybe they took a vacation?
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Uh, bro, sis, whatever, Luna talks using the old equish, yes. But it's been 4 years since her returning, and in the show she's talking "normally" after her visit on Nightmare Night.
Like I said, she still have her slip ups here and there, but she doesn't talk like that all the time, not anymore. This chapter felt a little weird to me because of that, but it made me want the next chapter as always
*sigh* every time I make a comment like that I feel like I'm being an asshole...
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I know and I apologize that this chapter was weird to you. I just liked thinking that Luna would keep her old way of speaking from before she became Nightmare Moon. I thought that she might develop a way of speaking that included both her old way and the new way as well, because she occasionally uses "you" instead of "thou" in this chapter. She only really uses it when with ponies she knows, like her sister.
And no you were not being cruel by speaking your mind. I do understand where you're coming from and I know that you are not trying to be rude. I liked the way that she spoke in this though. It separated her and made her unique, but you are correct that it doesn't fit into the show's canon. I'll think about it. Hopefully the next chapter will be more to your liking.
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Sweet picture Hillbe and I always find your comments amusing. Did you enjoy the chapter?
6796816 I don't have to change it just because of one reader, if you like to do this way, then continue. It was just my opinion and probably half of the readers like the way you did. I just thought that you made her use the old equish a bit too much.
6796816 you don't have to change it just because of one reader, if you like to do this way, then continue. It was just my opinion and probably half of the readers like the way you did. I just thought that you made her use the old equish a bit too much.
6796837 Yes it's a grand trip this story of yours.
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I appreciate that.
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Thank you, that means a lot. Yet another funny picture too. OctoRarity must be pretty darn good at massages.
Tiny print.