An ancient threat is clandestinely massing across the world as Rarity and Spike seek for answers to his mysterious past; however, their journey leads to something much larger than they anticipated, something that will change Equestria forever.
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The first fic I read that had Button's mom in it, her name was Love Tap, so sometimes it weird to call her by any other name
I'm liking this fic so far, I'll favorite it when I finish the other chapters, but for now have a like.
Funny thing is that there's no comments on most chapters, huh.
I don't have anything against this chapter, but I did find such a huge bout of exposition hard to stay interested in. At the very least it has me hoping all of that comes up again in the future in a more important capacity.
Didn't notice any grammatical errors but I want to choke Button's Mom really bad. Until her eyes pop from her head, and button abandoning video games. Bleh. He can smoke pole.
But that's just my opinion.
Also, screw giraffes. I just keep thinking of that giraffe from one piece.
Rarity could brag to those high-society trash.
Kind of a lost opportunity in the character development of Spike, in that there should have been enormous training to become an ambassador - you don't just willy-nilly make anyone an ambassador just because they have a good heart. Also the exposition of all of the info from the giraffe kingdom rather detracts from your main plot as entirely unnecessary to move the story along, so will lose the interest of readers as suggested by Kaii up there in the 2nd comment. Although, the intrigue of such a thing would make a good side-story, I guess.