I scribble stuff down on occasion, hopefully something worth while will come out of one of them.
After Gilda learns the secret for better scones, her GriffonScone stand is suddenly too small to handle the customers that swarm her every morning. So to help, she travels to PonyVille to get some help from the only person she remotely knows how to handle a business, a friend of a friend, Rarity. Though as the gryphon becomes more and more successful, her habit of taste testing every batch of scones becomes more and more prominent on her waistline.
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I quite certainly enjoyed this. A bit of an interesting take on the subject matter, it was amusing to see Rarity having also fallen to the power of the scones! Hehe.
It is also quite nice to be able to see the improved quality of writing with each chapter, as well as what seemed like a bit more passion involved in the writing itself.
I really wished you'd write more Phaelgud.
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Well, I can understand the writing improvement during the story because there were only 2 days left in the competition and basically wrote most of this in two bursts, a late night and a frantic afternoon. A bit of a challenge for me.
Thank you for the kind and constructive comments.
Quite welcome! I've done a couple rushed projects myself, it gets to be rather tempted to just hammer it all out to make sure its done on time, and one can easily get tunnel vision.
Ya know, i've always wanted to try editing a story or two. Would you mind if I took a crack at editing this story, just grammer, spacing, spelling ,etc?
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I don't mind at all if you edit it. Just send me the edited version through the FIMFiction mail.
Did you ever get my edit in the mail?
You should do a sequel to this that covers other parts of Equstria and how they were effected
Wonderful story! Would love to see what happens if Celestia gets addicted to them as well :)
Even without the fat and weight gian(witch i liked lol). I like the idea of glida expanding into a bakery. I like that rarity was thire to help with the business end of things. I enjoyed the fact that tree/table was right scoons were the key to help girffen stone. Becase of course great food brings ponys/girffens/ppl together. Over all a very good story.