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Half the time I don't even know how I do what I seem to do so well. I try not to think too hard on it, for fear of breaking myself in the process.

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A Naked Fall writing prompt fic.

Nightmare Night is a great deal of fun to be had, whether you're young or old. For Ponyville that fun manages to be doubled when Princess Luna can grace them with her presence, and attend the festivities as well.

Unfortunately a lack of social understandings leads to a fair bit of embarrassment, when Luna's choice of evening attire proves to be quite lacking, and threatens to derail the festivities entirely. Will she and the rest of Ponyville be able to recover from her blunder? Or will Nightmare Night be threatened by actions for a second time?

Rated T for nudity and social embarrassment themes.

More chapters may follow if support warrants them.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 38 )

10/10
Would read again.
Would continue to read should more chapters be added.
Would beg for more chapters should that increase the likelyhood of such.

Not bad not bad at all. :twilightsmile:

Please make more! :pinkiehappy:

My reaction to this first chapter of the fanfiction and Luna being buck naked in Ponyville of all ponies:

I'll have to read this later! :pinkiehappy:

"Princess Twilight," Mayor Mare spoke up curiously, "are you suggesting that Princess Luna should actually remain naked for tonight?"
"Well, Mayor, Princess Luna did come all the way here to take part in the festivities with us, rather than anywhere else in Equestria. And she did make a considerable effort to ensure that her status as royalty wouldn't make anyone uncomfortable, or affect the proceedings, despite having no need to do so. I can't help but think that it would be incredibly rude of us to not appreciate the efforts she made, simply because we find them a little odd," Twilight explained, doing her best to remain diplomatic throughout it all, and put as much of a positive spin on the situation as she could.
After a brief moment, she stepped closer, so she wouldn't have to speak at the same volume she had.
"There's also the fact that we could hardly try and hold Princess Luna to the same social standards as everypony else, even if we tried. Wouldn't you agree?" she asked.
"... You... may have a point there," Mayor Mare admitted, seeing what Twilight was getting at. They could either proceed democratically, or proceed otherwise. What could any of them really do, if they disagreed with Princess Luna's decision; ask her to leave? And what if, for whatever reason, she decided not to honor their wishes? What could they really do then? In recognition of such facts, she turned to face the present crowd and address them, knowing what had to be done. "Show us hands, everypony, who thinks we should show our appreciation to Princess Luna, for considering our feelings above her own?"

The part that really stuck out was:

"Show us hands, everypony, who thinks we should show our appreciation to Princess Luna, for considering our feelings above her own?"

I wonder how many of the hands that were raised were stallions. :trollestia:

~Crystalline Electrostatic~
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Really, and surprisingly glad that this didn't turn out as a one shot. Thoroughly enjoyed the update and looking forward to pumpkin or nudity related shenanigans. Also, nice "This Is Halloween" parody.

And what a body is was, that much was for certain.

What a body iT was.

how savy you might be

SavVy.

forced sense pride

Sense OF pride.

Minor spelling errors aside, this was a pretty damn good fic.

Zecora simply nodded. "When receiving visitors, I always dress in order to not offend. Comfort is nice, but not if it costs you a friend," she explained.

Sounds like some wisdom here.

"My advice to everyone, is that if you ever have a problem, do not be afraid to speak to someone about it. I know that may be asking a lot, but I can attest that it is far more painful to maintain silence, than it is to speak up," she stated,

Haha! The wisdom has been doubled!

Only works as Lulu has the body to get away with it.:pinkiehappy:

There gonna be an update anytime soon Charlie?

I don't really mind this being a short chapter. I'm just happy to see this story is still alive!

Okay the image of a naked Luna chasing a pumpkin with a 2 by 4 in her hand screaming "Face your Deliverance with honor" officially ranks as the most hilarious what the fuck scene I have ever read here on fimfiction

Discord is gonna show up butt naked, isn't he...? I'm calling it! Who Else Is?! :rainbowlaugh:

"Well, you see, Just Luna," Vinyl started again with a small smirk at reutnring the joke, "you were kinda drawin' a lot of attention by showin' up all butt naked an' such, and it wasn't the sort of attention that somepony in your position and standing should be getting paid.

returning

Everypony is acting like tonight is no different from any other Nightmare Night; it's easy to forget she'd nude until you catch sight of her again.

she's

"I can do that," Twilight replied and nodded, before standing back up again. "I guess we'll be seeing your shortly?"

Not sure if you go safe with 'you':pinkiehappy: or let it hang out with 'yours':pinkiegasp:

That tacos and chocolate sauce would go great together?" Pinkie asked as she appeared next to Rainbow Dash. "Surprisingly they don't mix all that well. I think it's the hot sauce."

Clearly, Pinkie has never tried mole. Mmmm, mole.

I honestly don't know why this story is interesting to me mainly cause i usually prefer fighting story's :unsuresweetie: ,but I shall say its a good story so far :pinkiesmile:

Looking forward to how this will progress. I half expect Octavia to join in on the bare escapades.

7636107 somehow I see more shenanigans being responsible for that

Twilight let out a sigh, before looking to Rarity. " "If Spike sees you nude in public, his dick may snap off its hinges," she mumbled, just loud enough to be audible.



Why is this so funny to me?:rainbowlaugh:

Quite an enjoyable tale. Hope to see more soon, however no need to rush on that front I'd say.

Was there a specific reason all the characters portrayed by Tabitha St. Germaine are the first to express public nudity? And should I be concerned that Granny Smith could show up in that fashion before too long? :twilightsmile:

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Sorry for the late response, it's been hectic over here.

Nope, no specific reason beyond them simply being the best choice for telling the story.

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No worries.

I note you didn't deny that a certain elderly apple might join the public nudity thing. :raritywink:

7628999 not enough anarchy. These are more of an annoyance

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Because for so long I've only had ideas for a few scenes, I have nothing in the way of material to fill them in to make a coherent chapter, and I just haven't had time to sit down and get my head around how to do things right.

hi, wondering if I could possibly get the image source or the artists.

black and purple striped stockings that went up to her black shorts were new, although the sleeveless button up shirt and tie weren't. The collared cape that reached down to her lower back just plain seemed out of place, and clashed with the overall color scheme.

I'm guessing vampire 🦇🦇🦇

"Now hold it right there, Rarity! If you're gonna call me something, call me something that I know what it is," Rainbow Dash retorted.

My mom always said that if you want to insult someone to do it so that they are left scratching there head trying to work out if it is an insult

Comment posted by Bookwurm666 deleted Jul 12th, 2021

a fair number of those who hadn't simply gone home, were having trouble returning to old business.

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I'd be willing to help there. I'm great with bouncing ideas around, maybe I could help you?

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