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The Dragon Warlock


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After a little over a decade, Princess Luna still feels an emptiness inside her heart. Seeing and protecting the dreams of other ponies leads her to an epiphany of what she desires... her own special somepony

Alternative universe is in place since this takes place after the events of FiM and ignores any possible spoilers for season 4. A collaboration story that's being co-writen by TheMyth

New cover art by Ragingsemi

Chapters (11)
Comments ( 176 )

Pipsqueak and Luna? I'm looking forward to where this goes ^_^

Twas read. Not bad. I shall follow.

2579728 Thanks. :twilightsmile:

2579835 Good to see you're onboard. :yay:

2579907 Yes. There is a reason he chose that name.

2580561 Hope you'll enjoy it.

(Not connected to the story)

The night's knight in the night of the knight where might of knight's with sight shall fight in the night's night for the knight of night's right to fight the knight of the sight where night's might shall right the knight of might in a fight of the knight's of sight and night.

:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

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The internet :raritywink:

I wanna name it the 'Knight's Story Challenge'

As I swore and have my full support on, I love this, every second, I'm going to completely ignore the very small amount of Spike/Rarity and we shall never speak of it again. Now onto more important matters....Flutter Dash is love at an amazing deal, never would have thought of Applejack and Soarin, that's vey new to me, I liked the deal with Pinkie and what's his face.....anyway, I wonder who Twilight is now with, if anyone, she is now the Goddess of Magic so that's a bonus for me personally.

I wonder why the name change with Pipsqueak, is he embarrassed? Ashamed of his name? What became of his real name? I love the OC guard of Luna who is married to a stallion, it's a new twist for me and very enjoyable. It has to be so heart breaking when you are a Goddess looking over innocent. mortal lives. Wonder if Luna will have a chat with Discord later or even Cadence or Twilight, you both are doing seriously well I'm very excited to see more of this:pinkiehappy:

2582812 I'm very glad you are enjoying this story so far. As for who Twilight is married to, that'll be revealed later. As for SoarinJack, that pairing is a bit small, but has a good following and I like the pairing a lot. As for why Pip changed his name, you'll soon find out why.

2582843 Very much, and cool, can't wait:derpytongue2: Really? Shit, never noticed that before:twilightsmile: Cool, can't wait:yay:

The gig's up Pippy! You've been had!

This is a great tale so far. Please keep up the good work upon such a wonderful story. :twilightsmile:

That's a great idea, talk about a Goddess as if she was a common whore, yeah that won't go bad at all. Ahhh, shit, Pip has been found out, this is going to be great:ajsmug: Damn, the guards are ASSHOLES! Love the punishment Luna gave to one of the guards, the romance shall now heat up:yay:

2587857 I hope Polished loves the smell of sewers. :rainbowlaugh:

2588024 Very, very true and I'm laughing so hard because of it:derpytongue2:

2588142 Well more shall be on the way.

This made my day seeing that you updated, loveing it so far:yay::yay::yay:

Luna girl, what are you planning?:rainbowhuh:

2603445 Ah, ah, ah . . . not telling. Just wait and see. :raritywink:

OMG this is going to get better

2605172 Hey, your avatar is actually the Pip me and TheMyth chose for this story.

2607175 Your avatar is actually similar to the version of Pip being used in this story. He even has a compass for a cutie mark just like the one on your avatar.

THANK THE GODS HE FINALLY HAS HIS REAL NAME!!!! I was honestly starting to get annoyed with his other one, unless it's a title like Elements of Harmony or Crystal Savior (a name I gave to Spike after he and Cadence defeated Sombra) then other names for ponies are really not needed, it seemed out of place, you know?

At any rate, describing the carnival with the length you did was very well thought of, I laughed so hard when Pip kicked Blueblood's ass, he deserves it. You did such an amazing job painting the picture of an beautiful night, normally I'm really not one for happy endings but for these two, I wish them both a happy ending, I'm very excited for more, I love the two gay stallions they are funny as hell:yay:

Wonder if Discord will appear? I love the God of Chaos and Disharmony.

2617403 I'm really glad you're enjoying this story so far mate. It's only going to get better from here. :raritywink:

2617414 I posted that not even two minutes ago...how the hell did you do that?:rainbowderp:

And :yay::yay::yay::yay: Shit, I always enjoy a good Pip/Luna fic, I love the pairing....matter of fact, I think I'll re-watch Luna Eclipsed right now, other then Pip having a cameo after that episode, I hope he appears again with a speaking role, love that little guy:pinkiehappy:

2617447 I respond so fast because of magic.

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Ok I'm sarting to feel good

Does Fillyfooler mean what I think it means? :twilightoops:

OOOOOOOHHH SHIT!!!! Celestia's onto her....oh buck, PANIC!!!!! Huh, nicknames, that's cool, a bit cute, I think:facehoof: Wow....that's a GREAT idea, attack a Goddess and her mortal lover you stupid fools, NOTHING can go wrong with that *rolls eyes* Wonder if any of the other Gods will appear, this is a really well made chapter and it had my complete attention. The romance seemed a little rushed though but it's all good.

At first I thought one of the thief's name was Fancy Pants and I was like WHAT?! Then I looked again and it said Funny Pants....whew! That scared me for a second:rainbowderp: Damn...this is getting intense, I can't wait for more:yay:

2635347 Criminals aren't that smart, they're just really overconfident and eventually pay the price.

As for Funny Pants, consider him Fancy's wayward cousin. Personally, I doubt he'll even remember him.

2635428 That is a really good point, for some reason I think it's hot if females were criminals:rainbowlaugh::facehoof: No clue why but it's sexy, like when a women smokes in my eyes:yay:

Huh......I sure hope not:facehoof: Hoping to maybe see a bit of Pip's past in the training days and what even made him want to become a knight in the first place if you please:twilightsmile:

2635596 It's always the pretty ones who are the criminals.

Nah, I was just joking about that. But a bit of Pip's backstory sounds like a good idea. I can talk to TheMyth about it and we can get it in the next chapter.

2635675 :rainbowlaugh: Don't think I would mid such if the hot ones were:ajsmug:

And awesome, I'm glad you like the idea, can't wait for the next chapter my brother, War, you got Skype? If so would you care to chat on it?:unsuresweetie:

2636114 Care to chat on it bro? My username is Flameclaws2 if you wish:twilightsmile:

2636186 I'll add you tomorrow. I need sleep now.

2636220 :rainbowlaugh: May Luna bless your dreams bro:twilightsmile: And thanks:pinkiehappy:

When the Gang leader made his demands, this went through my head

My Leg! :rainbowlaugh: Spongebob popped into my head, but seriously I love this story:heart::yay:

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