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Plagueboy23


I enjoy writing with my friend, Ringmaster 1336. My profile picture was made by the very talented Lime Overtime. I have a soft spot for HiE stories. MadMaxtheBlack is my inspiration for writing.

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Bro no disrespect but you misspelled high as hogh in your short description.

>>ILIKEBOOKS Thanks for letting me know, man. It's fixed! :)

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, omg i love this couple, its so fucking adorable

Bro, TwiSpike, PinkieDash, Flutterbulk holy fuck you have some kick ass cambos

Teen pip is raw as fuck, he could a rapper and i would be able to understand all of his lyrics

>>TheBassMonsterRemix18 Thanks, man! I'm glad you like the pairings!

You might wanna fix the description, because it didn't summarize ANYTHING about the plot.

>>Just Defender The description is just a short synopsis of how this whole story starts in the first chapter. I don't really see anything wrong with it.

6289166 That wasn't the author. Your beef is with Sergeant Antelec, the one who added it there.

“Oi. I won’t tell a soul. I swear on me mum, mate.” Pipsqueak assured Spike.

.....Why..

6303175 I was wondering when someone would catch that. lol

6303179 It's not a bad thing man. I facepalmed and laughed at the same time when I read that.

6303237 I'm glad you had a good laugh about it man. I appreciate it :)

6315451 I was thinking the same thing when I was writing the scenes XD

6397654 More is coming soon, I promise! College work is just punching me in the face repeatedly right now X3

6410013 I know, I'm just as excited as you are. I'm happy that I got a large chapter out after a month of NOTHING! College sucks! (Stay in school, kids.)

6410027 thank god im not in college. Im joining the army soon. My girlfriend says that most of the time college just eats up her whole day. That true for you too?

6410040 Yeah, pretty much. Army is cool, though! Thank you for your future service!

6410086 no need to thank me yet! I still need to pass basic training/ boot camp. Lol

One thing, tattoos should be covered for the first twelve to twenty four hours, hell ninety percent of shops will put an opaque bandage on the ink after their done putting it on the skin.

One more thing, tats are extremely sensitive for the first bit

6495273 I totally forgot about that, sorry, I know that must've been frustrating to read knowing that the guys weren't taking care of their tattoos right. I'll try to change those parts and still make it work with the story, thanks for the info, man!

6495347 Thanks mate it was a little frustrating but I've been in the chair getting new pieces more times than I've had birthdays so I pick up on these things

6495401 Like I said, really sorry about that. I'm swamped with schoolwork right now but I'll change it as soon as I can.

6495401 I think I've fixed that tattoo error. Let me know if I did ok, and thanks again for the info!

canit really be clop if it involves humans?

6616612 I guess it depends how you look at it. These characters are originally in pony form, so I guess it's just a loosely accurate term, more as a reference to the characters themselves rather than their form.

6616715 ehhh don't worry it was only a semiserious question

Please add the Equestrian Girls tag.

6616910 I kind of see your point, but there are a few things that I feel separates this story into its own universe. Firstly, there are several characters that are a different age in this story then they are in the Equestria Girls universe. For example: Pipsqueak and Spike wouldn't be in high school in an Equestria Girls story, and I put a large age gap between the CMC and Pipsqueak, even though they are all about the same age in Equestria Girls. Secondly, Spike is not a dog in this story as he appears in the Equestria Girls titles. Thirdly, though I use the same name for the high school as is used in the Equestria Girls titles, there are many differences within the schools themselves, and almost none of the events that have happened in the Equestria Girls titles hold relevance in this story.

So while I understand where you're coming from (and trust me, I did think about adding the Equestria Girls tag for a while), I've made a decision to not add the tag, because I feel that this story has enough differences from and holds no relevance to the actual storyline or developments within the Equestria Girls universe. That being said, I really appreciate your comment and I've taken your thought into account. Thanks again, and I hope you're enjoying the story so far!

6617958
So basically an AU. Still really Equestria Girls none the less. Just not the Canon one.
Of course any fan fiction comes with canon divergence.

6617977 I guess I could tag on the AU tag.

EDIT: I decided to add both the Equestria Girls and Alternate Universe tags. I'm pretty content with this decision, let me know what you think :)

Been interesting so far. Will be fun to see where this goes from here.

6662403 Yes it will be fun, indeed. Hopefully I can start to work in the real meat of this story soon. Stay tuned!

Poor Spike.

Its always the psychopath that doesnt go out of their way to warn you theyre coming thats the most dangerous.

The one that makes it obvious, well theyre the most visible target.

KO nice chapters, Spike is going to scare the hell out of Garble. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::rainbowdetermined2:

6998001 True enough. Still, Garble is not to be underestimated. Stay tuned to see what happens next!

6999111 Thanks, I was hoping that people would like what Ringmaster and I are starting to do with the story. And yes, I also think Grable will be in for quite the surprise. :pinkiehappy: Hope you're enjoying the story so far!

Well... I have a sneaking suspicion that Spike is going to get more action with girls than just... Twilight... if you know what I mean.

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Comment posted by Plagueboy23 deleted Dec 18th, 2016
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