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Twistedphoenix1


Just like writing stories for fun

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cheerilee is going to see zecora later huh...

‘...Just below a level up….’

Oh, I hate when that happens to me. Poor poor MC. Good chapter btw :pinkiehappy:

You'd probably get more traction with this if you released the chapters one at a time, daily or weekly.

This was very enjoyable!

Hello love the story .... hymn ....since you might have new readers I'll put my suspicion about iron will under spoil free I find it suspicious that the male coach was in the locker room when the only ones practicing were female students .... very suspicious.... could be he was doing pervy things with their clothes and got caught or was waiting on one of the girls to finish practice then when he tried to overpower a girl got his shit wrecked ...I'm guessing fluttershy who then proceeded to vamp his memory clean

He wanted to level up. And as with most games, he was willing to bet that when his level goes up, he will get less and less from the lower level mobs. Meaning he would eventually have to create higher level dungeons. Micro already had a few ideas, but for now he was trying to decide what to do with his funds and clones.

Do any games actually work like this? My understanding was that mobs always drop the same amount of cash it's just that higher level mobs will always drop more. So for example, if a level 1 mob drops $1 then a level 20 mob will drop $20.

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Yes and no.

For some games loot disappears after you reach a certain point but exp stays the same. But at that point the exp you gain from grinding such low level enemies is chump change.

15 exp a kill and 500 kills really isn't that impressive when you need 57,999,999 exp to level up.

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Ok, I will be open and honest here, when I was writing this it was a flow of thought. I knew some games did it, though perhaps as I was writing I was thinking about exp. for me it just made sense. Sorry for any confusion

I like how he is the only one with these powers, i dont know why but i do like it when the main protagonist is selfish about sharing his/her/ powers

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It’s not so much selfishness, more like he is the only one capable of using them to the fullest. As stated, only some powers transfer to others under party mode, so even if he were to party with, say Spike, and Spike went into an ID he wouldn’t get loot drops unless Micro was there to.

The ending bit feels rushed, felt should of been longer before revealing it. But on the other side. Will We find out what Dash meant by Twilight and Sunset thinking she and the others were evil?

More blood for the .... *ehem* I mean more women for the harem god. *egggh* I feel he's a little to forthcoming with his abilities ... without waiting to see what they wanted... to just give it all up ... damn .... he doesn't have a guarantee yet on anything. Let them ask first ... you practically outted your boy spike there. I mean we know why he's their ..its pretty obvious... even he knows why their there ... but he doesn't know their motives ... they could just tell him they know and to keep his nose clean or they'll be repercussions ... but knowing his abilities he's guaranteeing himself to be used ... theres no doubt observe isnt broken as fk. If you cant read them their abyss if there level so and so and over .... abyss. even the general titles names and background info is uber. The gamer only allied himself to his best friends group because he knew him for years... the ninja being an ally just sorta happened ...but hey busty ninja master with chocolate goddess lifemate whos kinky as fk you know its only a matter of time before off screen sexy times ensue... won't hear me complain. We know celestias pretty awesome but he shouldn't. He should assume she's daybreaker just until he has more info on her .... also firing a magic finger bolt at someone over twice your level was asking for her to beat the ever living snot outta you ....how he managed to get the shot off without someone noticing him pointing and not ripping his hand off while he cast the spell. But the moment he fired he should've been subdued. I fired because your being racist is 4 words to many to recieve retaliation from abyss veterans by the second word atleast 2 should've had him subdued in that room. Having a spell charged just means she should of unleashed it on him immediately after he fired. Guess we'll go with them being distracted by spikes transformation. Greeeat first half of chapter but as you can tell waa *meeeeh* towards the end.

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I see what you mean about it feeling rushed, but let’s face it, if Celestia and Luna know that there are two ability users in the freshman class, they would want to make sure that they won’t cause trouble. As such, they would take care of it as soon as they could. As for Micro being too forthcoming with his abilities, I get that as well but think about it like this. He is very logical. Gamers Mind makes that even more prominent. He knows that they are among ability users, and that more than likely, if they tried to hide, they would be viewed as suspicious, so he nipped it in the bud. Plus since Spike expressed the fact that she is a high level ability user in a previous chapter (Orientation your right before they split up) and did not panic, he could reasonably assume she is a good person and that those she trusts are trustworthy. Who knows? Maybe that attitude will get him in trouble later. As for the spike thing...just wait.

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Oook. but will we find out what Twilight and Sunset did to make the Rainbooms not like them?

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Next chapter...maybe....maybe I will make it a couple chapters after that. I have the idea together for why but I am debating the positioning. You guys will find out either before or right after (in story) “Saturday”

Of course Luna would be interested she is probability a gamer.

Great work!
Even though most was inspired or ripped of manwha comics but your application of everything just coming together is really good...
You also tend to focus on the sexy bits a little too much... Because a statement in observe for the girls stating their bust size? That kind of stuff is generally only seen in Eroge Games...
I am looking forward to how this story will develop (and how Micros lucky encounters with Fluttershy and his 'date' will develop)
Sincerly
J

“Hey no need to be upset Spike,” said Sugar, a boy with red and white peppermint swirl styled hair. "Here, have some chocolate.”

https://m.

“You ever wonder what it would be like to actually be in the game?” Sugar asked as he picked Greninja.

“You mean like those vr machines?” Spike responded.

“Kinda but I mean more realistic. Something where you actually perform the movements. If you see an attack coming you can slide out of the way or something like that.”

“Well, that does sound fun, but I doubt it can happen. I bet even Micro here wouldn’t be able to pull something like that off.”

Probably for the best.

“Sweet Tooth Green Apple!”

“Appleloosa Lickers!”

“Sweet Tooth!”

“Appleloosa!”

https://m.

Pipsqueek (Short but Sweet) Lv 9

Play see what you did there!

“Sorry I am late lads and lasses,” the door opened with an exotic voice. “I know you want to finish learning about your classes.”

Look at this! What do I see? My second favourite (humanized) not-pony!

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Baldi from baldi's basics
May God have mercy on their souls

Ok good chapter and now know why the other girls are angry at Sunset and Twilight.

I'm glad Micro didn't reveal everything but still screwed up a bit.
On Fluttershy I really hope she not the one responsible, despite Luna and Celestia being so sure, I can see they may over looked something.

I really really REALLY hope the spying on the date BACKFIRES big time, such as Fluttershy not the one, and it nearly ruins things between them.
I do like the pairing bit, but nobody said it should be easy, plus a little drama makes it fun.

Also tire of the things go wrong but they make up five secs flat crap story bit.
So hoping if backfires, backfires hard and takes time and real effort to repair things. Makes the story and the getting back together moment all the sweeter.

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...........Right right yeah....... Ok let's pretend i don't know WHAT THE HECK you are talking about, and explain to me what is this character.

Its a learning program, is it evil is it dangerous is it you learn this or die game?

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Ok thank you that makes it easier. When i can look it up.

The door to the girls restroom had opened up and Fluttershy stepped out, immediately tripping on Micro and falling to her hands and knees. The young Gamer went wide eyed as her knees landed on either side of his head. For the second time in as many days, Micro found himself staring up at yellow fabric flossed between two thighs.

I believe that the proper phrase here is "We have gotta stop meeting like this!"

Oh crap Scoots has really done it now.

Why him why him in that dungeon they Doom

Oof prepare for a real beating micro

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Baldis basics in education and learning

Ahh, I see the author is a man culture

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Why thank you. May I ask what specific part of the story tells you that?

Whoop.... full credit. Plus charisma.. micro you lady killer. If it gets high enough a mere glance will turn straight guys and lesbians bi ..... hahaha. Man he needs better mp regen or mp restore items. He could've released the clones doing games ... better a game over then a life over. Then he couldve surrounded baldi with clones in case he tried to move away one could get in the way and have arsenes chains prevent hits to the clones. Scootaloo scootaloo scootaloo who jumped on who in the boys bathroom.

Will any of the implied sex be female-dominant?

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If he means sexually a female will be the dominator .... Like busty ninja dominating zecora ..... but towards micro. Or maybe he means he's approached by a female who agressivly come after him first with desirable intentions. I could picture a female dragon kin being this way. Like spike having a cousin visit ...*cough* ember *cough*. Or maybe he means just females only for females?

“Long story short,” he started. “I have weird powers, my life is now a game, and we are now stuck inside a recreation of a horror game.”

I'm guessing Slender.

A troop of six clones appeared. Scootaloo jumped back in shock as they drew out their billy clubs and took up position. Two in the right hallway, one joined Spike and Sugar best the left door. Micro pulled Scootaloo with him past Baldi to the middle hall and by the first class room door.

beside?

“Either buying soda that can be used to knock Baldi or the others back, Candy to give running stamina, which I don’t think applies to us since we can just run, bribe the Bully to move, or it could be used to activate a sound machine to distract the bald bastard.” He flipped the quarter to her. “Hold on to this.”

A lot more complicated than I remember Slender being. I'm totally wrong.

Interesting. But, who is the DM?

Oh. Hmm. An overlaid universe?

Wot, no quest?
So it seems it's a localized overlay, and selective over the overlap transfer.

Simple grinding. But what is this? A Muggle?

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