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This...was hilarious.
I love his unsurprised reaction to being in equestria. and everything else. It's freaking hilarious! XD
He wasn't tackled by Lyra ...
Fix plz
Tracking
I CAN DIE PEACEFULLY NOW! :D
Huh, been a while since I've read an actual HiE fic.
In any case, I'm on patrol.
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Kill the stereotype.
Dont fix, plz.
MOAR PLZ ... He wandered through town without a PinkiePie encounter .
..ok , we could let the " human-fanatical Lyra stereotype " slide but this is blatantly unacceptable...
You cannot deny a PinkiePie the opportunity to make a new friend
7141437 Haha, well, I guess you'll have to wait for the next chapter to see if Pinkie makes her first human friend!
don't worry, there are plenty of Pinkie scenarios I'm already planning
Wait, so that human in the cover isn't from an anime? Yikes, you weren't kidding about him being talented. ...Say, is he as good at drawing ponies as he is drawing humans?
7141625 He's actually a digital artist, and he just spliced the two images together, he didn't draw Donovan. But, I've seen some of his other work, and he is indeed extremely talented. (More than I'll ever be, that's for sure )
Nice progress ....
Oh ...wait ...
where dafuq is Lyra ! ? !
7147953 Lyra is... somewhere.
Since I believe the sex tag is also involving the romance tag, I would like to know if you plan either a herd, or a normal relationship.
To be honest till now I usually only liked storys with 3 or 4 Ponys at most, and nearly all of them where my favourites.
7215722 That's a secret. You'll have to wait and see. But I wouldn't worry too much, let's just say the sex tag isn't only tied with the romance tag
7218918 well it looks nice enough, and maybe I end up liking it whatever may happens, I just don't enjoy certain types of stereotypes. (yes I think that is what I meant)
Only to be sure you didn't understood it wrong, I wasn'T affraid of anything sex related in this story, but sometimes I'm not sure if it is only because of the language, or if there is a real romance in there too.
I don't mind waiting, but if you do some sort of herd romance, I hope you actually built up a connection between the Ponys and him, since I always have a hard time to believe that four or five Ponys would just want to share the main Char.
Wow it's already awesome that this is a Main char/Human that actually understands the situation, even if Twilight sounds like she had a point there too. However most of the Humans well.......
It seems the age of Humans or main Chars that doesn't let themself only be ordered around, that aren't to stupid for their own good, or acting like a punching bag, has finally begun.
Nice first chapter, sometimes I have to force myself to try the first chapter of some new storys. Not that they would be bad, but even if it looks interessting, I only really start to get interessted after getting an example of said story.
I actually like it if the Unicorns aren't just allowed to catch other in their magic and well do stuff with them without asking, and something is telling me she wouldn't do it with other customers either.
I kind of hoped he would demand to pay, I'm glad for everything that is different from what one would expect, like Characters that even don't like to leech of others, just accepting it.
Ahh well I'm just happy that she actually need more than five minutes to make the clothes.
Okay till now I actually like this story.
That he actually worked as a bouncer, was a bit to much of an coincidence for me even if it was his first job he admitted doing.
Well just a bit to many Humans that actually suddenly are exactly finding that type of work that they are able to do, and not having to learn it.
Okay not sure how much I like it later, but till now it looks good enough, I can't really understand all the downvotes till now, but I wait a bit longer before I vote for this story.
I would like to have a new chapter please.
*<>* it lives !
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Well then, who is the guy in the cover art?
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It's the closest thing to how Donovan looks, or is supposed to look. That character in the cover art is something i pulled off of google images, not from an anime or anything, just an asset someone made.