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MORE?!
YOU WANT MOOORE?!
Here you go!
Love This chapter!!!
Especially the Crazy Train part!!!
Can't wait for more!!!
I bit the evil boss is Blueblood
Xante...
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Indirectly perhaps, him or any of the other Displaced that have sent out messages. But ultimately I was just trying to make it seem like she got it through some anonymous automated process, not wanting to directly mention or use another writer's character without their permission.
I've read a few other Displaced stories where the character not only received letters like this but then also sent out copies of it themselves. The one Maze got was just a one of those random ones sent into the voids after being copied one too many times, hence the different handwritings and odd grammar Lyra pointed out. There's actually a fairly strong chance of the information not even being valid anymore, twisted by the multiverse long game of telephone it's been through. I don't know, haven't decided yet
Still though, Good Catch!
Some errors, you might want a proof reader.
I read the author's note. I like you.
I throw one of my Jack's Orbs at you!
Did some quick editing of the prologue to make it a bit easier to read and make the formatting more like the rest of the story- will try to get a proper rewrite once my skills improve a bit more. I didn't really change anything though, so no need to reread if you don't want to
(I really like that emote, it's just so cute!)
I think I'd like this story more if the main character wasn't so obnoxious. "lol random monkey cheese" writing is honestly kind of lazy and sucks any and all actual personality out of him/her. "Maisie" is a walking punchline at this point, not a person.