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Ok so yeah, I'm seeing a lot of little errors here and there in the new chapter and fixing them as I find them- so maybe give it moment before reading or keep hitting refresh to help avoid them... I really with FiMfiction had a better preview option right about now
EDIT: Ok, It think I got MOST of it, but will read through it a few more times to try and find anything else I missed, and I'll make sure not the rush as much with the next one.
A few mistakes regarding spelling. It was a fine read. Work on showing, not telling.
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Yeah sorry, but I don't what you mean by that
6145320 For me its one of those things you get feeling on but can't explain.
This link might help:http://bethrevis.blogspot.com/2009/05/difference-between-showing-and-telling.html?m=1
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Oh, ok then I kind of get. It makes more sense now at least and I'll try to keep it in mind when writing, thanks
And there goes that sentiment, eh?
Ooh. That must be the first time I've seen someone pluralize "crisis" properly here.