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Some reason Jynx from LoL came to mind at that last bit.
Seems like I lost a good number of my readers with the hiatus huh?
Oh my, suddenly eight comments for a story I though most people forgot!
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I've been meaning to re-write the earlier chapters to bring them in line with the later ones that, if I'm aloud to say myself, are at least a little better and more focused/coherent - less random and more story. Maze is supposed to be a little irritating actually, but not that much and only to the other characters... This IS my first full length fan fiction though, so I'll use that excuse this time .
I Have actually done some small edits here and there to try and alleviate some of the more glaring amature mistakes 7530969 Though it seems I missed that one!
Yep! I hope I've since made it clear that that's the point: Maze tries really hard to be cool, and can even do some really cool stuff, but is ultimately just a total dork.
Now I may not be reading it right but the general feeling I'm getting from you is "Not terrible", which from you about a diplaced story seems like high praise... I'll take it! Thanks
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It is fun enough that I've actually read it completely and didn't feel like cringing, so yeah, I you can take that as a compliment.
On the whole, this is really not done badly. You've got a real plot and side characters that matter for more than just being punching bags and showing off how powerful the displaced character is, that's lengths better already than the typical story like this. I think you've been leaning a bit too heavily on the plot of the games in places - the sewer facility being pretty much a straight knock-off of Revengeance may have been a bit much - and I think it has gotten a lot more interesting since Celestia flipped out and it started being more of a story of its own, but on the whole, I'd say keep doing what you're doing.
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You're waiting for the next chapter of Locked Heart?!
Well then you should go read it!
7734696 I already did, an now I am caught up on this as well.
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Glad you're enjoying it!
Keep an eye out for the next chapter (yes finally) as I'm a good ways through it. I was actually planning to have it out last week, kind of a treat to go with the new season and all but well, I just got out of the hospital yesterday which had put everything on hold. Still working on it, just a little slower but hopefully soon! Thanks again
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I'm guessing something came up?
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Yeah I got about halfway, maybe two thirds the way through writing it and then looked back through what I had and the primary thought I had was "This Fucking Sucks!"... so yeah lol - been rethinking how to structure the chapter and keep hitting walls- So good news for all Locked Heart fans, as I figured I'd focus on that and then come back to this after with hopefully fresh eyes. Sorry about the wait, but thanks for sticking around
Of COURSE! Also, Discord would love Maze.