• Member Since 30th Jul, 2014
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Sumiye


One Life. Live It.

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Gilda's been at Junior Speedsters Flight Camp for 3 months, and she still feels like she hasn't found her place. Even with her unique flight skills, the others seemed to ignore her entirely since she is a Griffin.

After another day of practice routines and ridicule, Rainbow Dash decides her friend needs some cheering up. And she's not giving up until she finds a solution to the griffin's problem.

Besides, most times all a sad friend really needs is a treat and someone to share the experience with.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 12 )

Aw, this is so sweet. And I'm not just saying that because of the treats. :rainbowkiss:

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Well, you can always count on sweet food to make a day better. For the win!:yay:

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You sum your opinions in the best way, my friend.

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Even when I read this, I can't help saying the same thing!:rainbowlaugh: Thank you!

I swear, this story is so teeth-grindingly cute, my teeth are cracking into shards!

The hnnng is strong in this one.

Ow, heart, my heart, owwwww...

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I know, right..?

For one of your first stories, this quite good. Although, I will admit some parts could've been a bit stronger but as a whole, I personally enjoyed it. It had a very heart-warming, cutesy atmosphere about it which is a nice change. Its almost like a time machine, taking me back to when I first started writing on here three years ago. Because this is exactly the sort of story I used to write a fair a bit, something light-hearted and fun whilst still been an excellent way of practising my abilities.

Thank you for writing such a sweet story. :heart:

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Thank you so much. I always appreciate a writer who can give me a full thought about a story or one shot I wrote, it's always helpful for me to work better when it comes to works of any type I'll do on the future.

I'll admit, this is not one of my best work, but I'm glad that you liked it and had then chance to say so here.

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