After slamming her home down Blackthorn tells her he will personally help clean her home. She happily accepts the act of kindness, the problem is she is a bit clingy. Based on the end of comic issue 28.
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RaritySimper44
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Nice pic! Yours? Gonna read later!
6196833 No its not mine. I found it on the internet. Hope you like it.
6196837 indeed.
Well I promise to give it a look!
Not much of a Rarity fan but this was very well written. I felt she was very in character. Well done.
I LOVE it!!! Note, though, that there are, like, one or two grammar mistakes that a lot of haters are gonna point out in angry reviews (I am not a hater
).....
6198856 Okay thanks for the heads up. And I'm glad you liked it so much.
6198599 Thank you. I tried my best to keep her in character. Though my editor helped a lot with that too. I'm glad you liked it.
If you really want random readers' opinions, this story would be easier to read, if it was twice shorter.
This was easier to read then your other stories, but it was too long for its own good. If it was condensed it would be much better.