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After coming home from their camping trip Sweetie Belle finds a new inhabitant in her sister's shop. Young Cross Eye has taken on apprenticeship to the fashionista and Sweetie Belle is not happy about it. But as time goes on the pair start to get closer. Will either party have the courage to admit their newfound feelings? Meanwhile Rarity is facing her own dilemma with Spike. What will be her ultimate decision with the young dragon who's grown attached to her?

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Wow, in five minutes Sweetie Belle went from hating Cross' guts to schoolyard crush. That escalated quickly.

2033795It's kid love, it's crazy and makes little sense but that's what makes it beautiful in a way.

:heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart:

That is all that needs to be said.


(I notice my suggestion was useless. I apologize. I'll try to be of better help in the future.)

2033882I did present you with a case of kid love. I'd welcome any suggestions for some of the other couples in Noir however, just PM me.

So.... much... dawwwwwwwww :raritydespair:
Okay, that was just beyond adorable. I approve!:moustache:

Thinking about it, in pony years, there isn't much of a difference in age between Rarity and Spike. Considering both the show and the time frame for the Noir series, he must be about 17 in pony years, with Rarity being about 21 or 22.

Really enjoyed this story, glad to see Cross will be appearing more often with SB, I really like his character.

Nice story, it is cute to see Cross and Sweetie together but I'm also happy to see Spike and Rarity are now a couple in this series.

Sweet Luna on a pogo stick...

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

Also, that tallying thing with the two sisters? :rainbowlaugh:

2561352That whole Luna on a pogostick is a fallout equestria reference to Littlpips *ahem* colorful language.

2561361 Incidentally, googling for 'luna on a pogo stick' gave me this as the first result:
Luna Finds A Pogo Stick [Drunken/Sleepyfic Challenge]
by wolfvenom

2561354 I iz maester wisurd harry:derpytongue2:

YEAHHH Spike and Rarity, finally! Woo! I think I may have gotten a tad overexcited. uh hum.

Also, 'a tally for me'! Fandabbydosey. :moustache::duck:

I just realized that you seem to have quoted from Les Miserables. It was quick and if I have note seen the latest movie not to long ago I would have missed it. Nicely done.

Aw...how sweet. You go Spike! :moustache: Great job! :eeyup:

Guess royal duties turned into that stuff.


'Oh, Luna on a pogo stick !:raritywink:

Excuse me a sec as I hnnng.
HNNNNNNNNNNNGGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!
GAWD THIS WAS ADORABLE!!!!! MOVE ASIDE FEDEX, THERE'S A NEW SHIPPER IN TOWN!!!

YYYEEESSS!!! FINALLY!!

:heart::heart::heart::heart::heart:

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