• Published 21st May 2012
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One Last Kindness - ChaoticHarmony



Fluttershy has always lived being kind, what happens when she grows cold?

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Epilogue: Spreading the Kindness

Dear Angel and my friends,

If you are reading this, then I’ve gone up above the clouds. I’m sorry that I have to leave you all like this. I would take you with me if I could! I swear it! But that would never work. After all, you have your own little families to look after, and it wouldn’t be fair of me to have you forever. I don’t want to leave knowing that I didn’t give everypony my love. I think that now I’ll go to my possessions.

To the greatest bunny I could ever ask for, I leave my stack of golden carrots in the hope that he will enjoy them as much as I would, that is…. If he wants to.

To the rest of my friends at the cottage, I leave you my home, in the hope that you will save other animals with love and care, like I did.

To the Ponies of ponyville and most importantly my friends, I leave a hug for them in the hopes that it will pull them from the depths of sadness and cruelty and drive them to love everything.

I will miss all of you, but most of all I will miss my friends Twilight Sparkle, Pinkie Pie, Rainbow Dash, Rarity, and Applejack. My one regret is that I didn’t have enough time to spend with you all. Angel, please see that they get this letter I’ve enclosed in the will’s envelope, I think they will find it as comforting as you did.

Confused, Angel turned over the envelope and saw a glint of yellow flash in the sun. As he held it to the light, Fluttershy’s voice sang out sorrowfully from the enchanted paper.

Hush now quiet now
It’s time to lay my sleepy head
Hush now quiet now
Don’t fear for me when I’m dead

Hush now quiet down
It’s time for me to go now
Hush now quiet down
It’s time to say goodbye

Hush now quiet now
It’s time to go away
Hush now quiet now
It’s time for me to say

Goodbye

Blinking away the sudden tears from his eyes, Angel set out to deliver his oldest friend’s message.

Comments ( 31 )

625078 Wait...... you mean to say that I surppased MLD in sadness?

The song got me. Great job on the story.

625769 It got me too.... I cried while writing it :fluttercry:

I was having a good day...

*sniffle* Why did I read this? Now I'm going to go to bed sad. :fluttercry:

632188 Well, go read my other two sadfics.... go to sleep bawling! *laughs evily* MWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

Un-freaking-believable, I saw this this morning, but didn't read it cause I was looking for something else.. :facehoof:

653557 Hehe, did you like it?

Yes. Yes I did. I enjoyed crying very much. :moustache:

Would you mind reading my Ping Pong story?
Pweeeeeeeeease? :fluttercry:

653608 Hmm? What do you mean by "reading"? Like, voiced? Or just read it?

Just read it :derpytongue2:

Aw, now that's adorable, how can you not love that face?

653619 It's not on your page. I think you haven't submitted it yet.

I thought I did... Hm...

Okay, not sure how I missed the 'Submit' button, but there we go! Submitted! :pinkiehappy:

You and your sadfics :facehoof: WHY U NO GRIMDARK LIKE MEH?

670855 *cough cough* Try Change of Heart *Cough cough*

670867 * suspicious*

670968 That's my Grimdark one....

670977 seems more sadfic than grimdark.. :facehoof:

Ha, the perfect solution for reading something short before going to bed!
What I think about it? Well, making a story in barely two pages is something, that's..hard. But for what's possible, it was rather good, as suspected. :twilightsmile:

no thats impossible there is no way its complete cause you didnt show what she had that would kill her and you got to show angel giving the message to fluttershys friends and them reminiscing on there happy memories on their happy memories and then finally funeral. :fluttershbad::fluttercry::raritydespair::raritycry::applecry::pinkiesad2::applecry::moustache::moustache::moustache:

nuuuuu how did flutters die and why do you make me cry?:fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry:

:yay::heart:
I WELL ALWAYS LOVE FLUTTERS!!!!!

Oh God! THE FEELS! :raritydespair:

How did she die? Or is that left to the imagination? I imagine some sort of illness.

I have been touched by the words you wrote. The streams of tears came down most at the adaptation of Hush Now, Quiet Now........:fluttercry::fluttershbad::fluttercry: It's was beautiful. (In a really sad kind of way)

Damn, right in the feels.

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