Keepsake Apples

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Big Macintosh Apple, a quiet and hardy stallion. His life is nothing but farm work and time with his family. He never thought he would be the one to hold on to his family after they let go of life, but here he is now, enveloped in memories.

Special thanks to:
VexPon for the amazing coverart! http://vexpon.deviantart.com/

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FierySoul

FierySoul #1 · Jul 14th, 2012 · · ·

I liked it!. It had a very heartwarming tale. And it was close to what I would consider the story to be, I would like if you could add the last roundup in there somewhere. Only because I feel it would fit in well with the flow of things Imagery was awesome. Great detail and descriptiveness. It's nice to get a break between all of your sadfics.

I do however in the future want maybe more action in your fics cause you did that AMAZINGLY well in the Trixie fic and I enjoyed it a great deal. (I also felt you could have added maybe a scene with the timberwolves for an action scene) Just a thought. Anyways great job as always ! 9.4 out of 10

your friend,
DarthPony

Red Wood

Red Wood #2 · Jul 15th, 2012 · · ·

Very well written, I almost lost it when Big Mac started crying, I always do..

The Grey Pegasus

The Grey Pegasus #3 · Jul 16th, 2012 · · ·

It kinda hurt to read this. Good job.

ChaoticHarmony

ChaoticHarmony #4 · Jul 16th, 2012 · · ·

921426 Indeed. It hurt a bit to write it

NaturalGlitch

NaturalGlitch #5 · Jul 16th, 2012 · · ·

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BR #6 · Jul 16th, 2012 · · ·

This is the best story ive read in a very long time.

Props to you, CH.

Emerica

Emerica #7 · Jul 16th, 2012 · · ·

SO SADS...

jack_fraust

jack_fraust #8 · Jul 19th, 2012 · · ·

aww. thumbs and favs man.

DbzOrDie

DbzOrDie #9 · Jul 25th, 2012 · · ·

The feels, they hurt

ChaoticHarmony

ChaoticHarmony #10 · Jul 25th, 2012 · · ·

970379 The feels are what I go for. All the time All the feels.

Harmonic_Chaos

Harmonic_Chaos #11 · Jul 28th, 2012 · · ·

I like how you used scenes from the show itself, made it all the more believable.
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Spades_of_Ace

Spades_of_Ace #12 · Jul 28th, 2012 · · ·

Not bad, not bad at all. I like it even though it was sad.

JKaneH

JKaneH #13 · Aug 3rd, 2012 · · ·

i knew it was gonna be sad.. i knew it, its all you write!, so why is this so sad!....
it was incredible sir. good job. ...

Brony of Truth

Brony of Truth #14 · Aug 20th, 2012 · · ·

I haven't cried in five years. "he could still hear her pained shouts and whimpered from beneath the jagged boards." This statement killed me inside at how emotionless I've been.