• Member Since 7th May, 2012
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ChaoticHarmony


Hey guys! I write sadfics and sadfic accessories! Oh, and I also do comedy things. Yeah. Feel free to check out my stuff! And I hope you enjoy whichever story of mine you happen to be on! ^^

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Everypony always asked Scootaloo why she uses a scooter all the time. She always said some kind of excuse. From using it to get around to saying it was her school project, she has said a ton of things to cover up the real reason why she uses it; to fly... or at least try to.

Sad in the beginning and the middle, but with a happy ending!

Special thanks to Sketchy Start for the idea!

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Comments ( 16 )

:scootangel: Yay! The angel gets her wings!

Oh, I like

Sad in the middle? With a happy ending? And it's all condensed into 1300 words?:ajbemused: ... *sigh* Only because Scootaloo is best pony. *starts reading*

title: Hearts On Fire reference? :pinkiegasp: u gets a like for that (even if its not it reminds me of that song :derpytongue2:)

Nice one-shot focus on little Scootaloo. :scootangel:

Hmm... not bad, it could use some touching up, but theres some potential here. Would you like me to help you out with this? I do reviews on Ponychan and my queue's empty at the moment. I really like what I see in this story. Mostly because Scootaloo but whatever sells the apples right? :scootangel:

671639 Thanks, but no thanks. This was just done to ATTEMPT a happy fiction. I find that I am MUCH better at sadfics. Problably won't write a happy one for a while :pinkiecrazy:

And the fact that you love sad fics is the reason why i follow you :moustache:

first sad, still sad, EPIC HAPPY :yay:

702913. Indeed :moustache: tis problably the ONLY fic that I have made... SO FAR at leasr, that has a happy ending. :moustache:

d'aaw.. she finally got them under control!

A scooter with an airbag? She is actually better off being able to fly... seriously though, an airbag? Can someone make a little flipbook showing what is wrong with that? It is dangerous, seriously? An airbag, scooter without back. That is really bugging me.

849020 This was written near the dead of night about a MONTH ago. My story-creating skill have VASTLY improved since then. Try reading something newer of mine.

About time she has finally found her ability to fly! She has earned that happiness!!! :yay:

Funny thing. Got totally disappointed by tv. Freedom Writers is on, they said. Nothing is on!
And then this fiction. To be honest, I hadn't high expectations for it to fit my feelings. Few words and I'm not much into the Scoots topic. But as I know the author knows how to execute his ideas, I thought it to be a nice day-finisher. But nooope. Instead of that, you gave me what people call inspiration, on a high level! The idea that Scoots needs a scooter to fly seems obvious, but that alone can't fly. And if her wings would still be unable to keep her in the sky, she'd need a flying scooter. Too bad that such one doesn't exist. But only because something is in the realm of nonexistence, that doesn't mean that it's unreachable! Why not twist reality for a dear friend? I see an epic journey to be written.

As for the story, the end sounded somehow like two speakers which are countering themselves in frequency. The feeling was happy and light, yet the words seemed to be still trapped in the earlier sadness. How do you even achieve that?

Very end seems to come out of nowhere. Still, aside from that, a decent story, so fav and upvote it is.

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