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Lol can't wait.
Also I'm gonna start shouting "Bathroom!!!" Every time I get uncomfortable in a situation and running away. Good tactic spike! 10/10 would do again.
it was very good but I think Applejack would have been a little bigger in the chest Department I especially think she would have at least been bigger than Rainbow Dash
Friendly AJ is good. Still made me laugh and can't wait for the rest.
Shouting 'Bathroom' when running away from a nervous situation. That should be a thing.
Good chapter. Few grammar mistakes here and there. You really need to get a proofreader.
*to and I'm guessing *barn
*big
I can't wait to get to the party now, I have a feeling "Bathroom!" will be the least of what Spike's shouting
I think I've commented more on this story more any other store on this site that I have favored lol lol
And so we have only the one left, Rarity, fitting to leave the crash for last... and her sister the popular shipping.
And nice escape tactic Spike...
BATHROOM!
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I think he would be able to escape his love.
Last one is Rarity. Knowing her, she will use his crush to her advantage. Wonder how he is going to react. Hope he can keep his dragon in his pants.
Now just Rarity and Sweetie, unless you've got more than the mane six and their siblings planned?
Hey Spike, if you don't want your life I'll fill in for you
Another excellent one.:D
I'm getting the feeling twilight already spread the word
next chapter please
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Escape his love... what?
I feel like you could combine some of these chapters and nothing would be lost.
6123543 She already did at the end of the second chapter.
I'd accept a roll in the hay.
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Did you forgot Rarity? His love? His Dream? I bet he will love to be suffocated by her assets.
6124195 yes yes yes
6122692 me too
Despite the fact that most of the girls are acting like total sluts which brings things totally out of character. Them having sex all the time I don't like and was about to click the hate button until I saw that Spike was in it and was the one running trying not to impregnate.... well the whole town at this rate I'm ok.
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No, it's the way you wrote your last sentence, 'I think he could escape his love', I was confused at what you meant.
Starting to think he has a bladder infection he has to use the bathroom so much.
You tease
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Sometimes I am too hungry that when I write, I eat letters.
6125496 lol
can't wait for the new chapter
I don't know about anyone else, but a CCC cup size makes no sense to me unless the author has his own headcannon on bra sizes.
For reference:
List of Bra Sizes
Bra Sizes in Order, a List
I'm surprised Spike hasn't caught on to all these girls saying how he will need to be 'ready for tonight'.
6124599 Or a masturbation one
When Applejack tackled Spike, the only thing I could think about was imagining this scene, then when she tackles him, the GTA V "Wasted" sign. XD
>>Path_of_Cloud
He doesn't actually go to the bathroom. It's just an excuse for him to get away, and most times, it works better than expected.
Spike sure uses the bathroom excuse a lot... I hope this doesn't turn into a toilet play story in later chapters.
Telling it like it tits I mean is.
BATHROOOOOOM!!
XD
He was able to Sprint with all that stuff! Just how
fit is he
That's blasphemy
What age is applebloom in this story ???
Just asking for uh friend????