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I enjoyed this. It wasn't what I figured the Fluttershy chapter would be. I was gonna guess at her cottage, maybe even bring up that horse she has.
The chapter was still good, and I am curious if they're going to the have anther little orgy. That way, Spike is being doubly sure the girls get impregnated.
I hope Spike makes it up to Fluttershy and have more fun with her down the line.
Heh reminds me of Replica's Art-Works
Another great chapter, eh? Though, I do hope that he reveals it was him that impregnated her.
I like the pattern you're using. Something tells me that Pinkie might know about Spike's plan after he's done with her, just saying. She's got her Pinkie Sense working for her.
One big problem to correct. Spike never used the impregnation potion for Fluttershy there. He's supposed to use it for each of them.
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I didn't make it as obvious as the previous chapters so I can understand how you missed it.
6636939 Ah.
6636857 Maybe, but those tail twitches might give Spike just the.... *ahem* opening he needs....
Okay, you teased Octavia. Spike has to fuck her now
6638118 Maybe.
I guess Pinkie Pie will be the next to be impregnated. That will leave the trickiest for last.
Nice, I eagerly await the next chapter.
Boooo! That was really bad!
Hit publish by mistake?
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Yep
Ok, good Spike. You realize what you're doing is wrong. The next step is to correct your methods to the best of your abilities to do it a moral way.
(One chapter reading later)
Oooor you could just keep going about your amoral business with nothing learned and nothing changed. Yeah, that heel realization clearly didn't amount to much.
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Don't worry. I'll deal with that moral ambiguity in a later chapter. (Probably the last chapter.)
6721960 yeah...
but where's the fun in that?
I didn't completely understand it. How did he go from RD's slave to a fuck hole like that?
Also I would have liked to see more of Spike's punishment play out.
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