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I see you often use 'there' where you mean to use 'their' on this. 'there' is a location. 'their' is as if the item is theirs.
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Sorry. A lot of this fanfiction is written late at night. And grammar isn't exactly my strong suit an 12:30 pm.
6474802 lol Understandable.
Ah. Another common misspell. Using 'loosing', as in making something loose and not tight, instead of 'losing', as in making something lost or losing a competition or the like.
And using 'where' when you mean to use 'were'.
Very nice chapter. And thanks for the thank you. Glad my idea inspired ya.:D
Hotness. Also, Spike has alot of work ahead of him if he's gonna be a father.
And, glad I called it with Tia and Lulu.
Cadence's cup size please.
Celestia should at least ask them before getting them knocked up.
So if they were turned into bimbos to help them mate, does that mean once they're pregnant, they'll go back to normal? Part of me hopes so, at least because I think it would be the most interesting.
Another good question would be, is he going to stop at just the bearers or is he gonna knock up the CMC too? (Especially since someone really seems to want him )
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I'd put it at about E cup.
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Spike won't be knocking up the CMC. I don't think he can handle six kids, let alone nine.
What!? This isn't going to work! Spike may make an okay father, at the moment (he'd make a good father in the future but he's still a bit young). But there is no way any of the Bearers would make good mothers! Not in their cuttent state!
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Yeah, but then again, if they were only turned into bimbos to mate, maybe the elements turn them back so they can be better mothers. After all, it doesn't make sense if your goal is to get them to mother the next generation if you turn them into bad mothers.
6477267 I hope so, the Princesses never changed back, but then again they never got pregnant either (that we know of). Seeing as all of Ponyville was changed then look at Mrs. Cake. She's a mother, so if she's a bimbo then there goes that theory.
friend took me the whole damn night full read it, but let me tell you that I love the fic. also I understand what impregnation and others and it is certainly a great idea that you place it.
So if the only thing I did not like were the following three things.
1) that the characters are human, it would have been better if they were humanoid dragons ponies and something like what you see in this link
spike
(Http://img02.deviantart.net/dbda/i/2013/102/e/4/spike__by_ss2sonic-d61j9tt.jpg)
celestia, moon and Candace
(https://derpicdn.net/media/W1siZiIsIjIwMTIvMTIvMDUvMDhfMDdfMDVfMTA2XzE3MzI3M19fVU5PUFRfX3ByaW5jZXNzX2NlbGVzdGlhX3ByaW5jZXNzX2x1bmFfYW50aHJvX3F1ZWVuX2NocnlzYWxpc19wcmluY2Vzc19jYWRhbmNlX2dyb3Rlc3F1ZV9zd2ltc3VpdF9mdXJyeV9zcG9pbGVyX3MzdW5rbm93biJdXQ/173273__princess-luna_princess-celestia_suggestive_anthro_breasts_queen-chrysalis_princess-cadance_swimsuit_princess-breastia_furry_artist-ss2sonic_non-mlp-oc.jpg)
and the mane 6
(http://pre10.deviantart.net/4447/th/pre/i/2014/115/6/6/mane_6_anthro_height_chart_v2_by_ambris-d7fuvzd.png)
Reason 2
Please do not repeat that several men that a single woman, in short with anyone else not repeat that scene as Candace fuck.
I really do not care about a man with several women but if one woman with several men at once, really is tasteless.
And the last reason is more a question than a complaint
chrysalis queen, appear in this fic
good at summing up I love this fanfic and I expect Continues to the end and not be like those authors left incomplete the best stories.
legnaro444 carefully (real name orangel meza)
I think that a lot of people are over thinking this, but it's good to see so much interest in this story.
It's Spike's Bimbo Filled Life so seeing everyone turned into bimbos is to be expected. I believe the author has also tried to state that despite several bimbo like qualities in the Mane 6, they all retain their competence in their fields, like Twi keeping her knowledge, just getting a huge playful libido and occasional absent mindedness as well.
If this were a serious fic I'd agree with all the arguments, but this is a sexy romp of impossible magic and horny pony women so what the heck, everything will be all sunshine and rainbows ever after. The End. No need to delve any deeper than that.
And speaking of bimbo's, surprised to see the other princesses weren't bimbos as well. Though maybe Spike's exposure to the elements and dragon heritage has made him something of the typhoid Mary of bimbofication and Celestia and Co. just had their brains banged out somewhat. Again don't want to cause the collapse of pony society, just more bimbo fun.
So maybe Celestia could wake up with a sunnier disposition, but ironically come across as a bit dim. Still as smart but constantly in a good mood and giggling and speaks and acts in a bimbo like manner. Diplomats could be unnerved when they're constantly out maneuvered by someone who acts like a giggly ditz twirling her hair, but wields laws and information like a honed blade.
Luna could be a Sensual bimbo, bed room eyes and a smouldering voice promising nightly delights. Still as dangerous as ever though to those that think of her as a mere seductress.
And Cadance ..... I just think cheer leader bimbo for some reason. Perky and bouncy, a real motivator and spirit booster, but still just as savvy into others emotions and motivations.
Great chapter, actually this is a great story. Didn't think I could get so much fun out of such a silly premise. Keep up the good work and have fun!
Ok so the elements make the girls ridiculously attractive, and sex crazed to get them to breed and have offsprings I get that, that makes sense. But why did they also make the girls into airheads to, and why did the elements spread the effects through out Ponyville to?
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Even by this fic's standards, that is ridiculous, for one, I think it's only 2 letters max, not 3, but what do I know?
Oh dear.
Indeed.
MS Word has a good grammar checker. Try using it, it spotted pretty much all of the screw ups.
6491807 Yes, I was thinking that too
Dragons have lots of stamina.
6935928 they also are talking like dumb blonds!!!!!
So where is the guide to humanized Equestria?
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Because brains aren't always a desirable trait unlike looks and Plus they might think twice about having sex if they can actually think about something besides sex.