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Spike got to Rainbow, one down and more to go. Great job.
I think you meant to say "Spike saw an opportunity for him to act"
Blood Speedster: This chapter wasn't rushed, it was normal speed for having Rainbow Dash in it, don't need to worry, and Spike, Fluttershy will be one hell of a ride very possibly, and I don't even want to think about Shy inviting Discord to this fuck fest, or is this story before him? I don't even know.
It's always the shy ones. Also, funny how Spike just fell asleep.
So much grammar issues, but other than that, another good chapter.^^ Still hope there will be signs of the princess's attempts to suppress the bimbofication field starts to fail before he has finished though. XD
Yes, I can't wait for Fluttershy! I'm so excited!!!
Sorry it took me so long to comment, but I wanted to give this chapter the reading it deserved.
This might be my favorite chapter so far. To be honest, some of the past chapters I skimmed through because the situations struck me as almost generic setups and sex scenes. But this chapter is really creative. Sexy yoga is a really cool idea to explore, and you used it to make some really unique scenes. I carefully read it so that I could properly envision their poses. The impregnation also works here, especially because it involves Spike knowing who he's up against and coming up with a plan tailored specifically for her.
This didn't feel rushed or too long. If anything this was perfect both in terms of length and pacing.
If I had one nitpick or afterthought, it would be the occasional typos that slipped through, or one part in particular during the sex, when Spike was face-fucking Rainbow. Spike blowing his load in her mouth would be a big problem for his plan, since if he can't get it back up again he's not only wasted the opportunity, he's wasted a dose of the potion too. And realistically, if his balls have already contracted and he's erratic, he's over the edge and it's going to be hell to stop himself from cumming. But not only does Rainbow decide to pull off just in time, but as soon as she does, any chance he has of cumming prematurely just vanishes. For a sex scene that's supposed to be a challenge and a struggle for Spike, it seems like self-control would be really important, and it would be really cool and on-theme to see him struggle not to blow his magic load before he's ready. But like I said, this is just a nitpick and a thought. I really did enjoy the chapter through-and-through, and I can't wait for the next one.
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Yeah. They were kinda designed to sound the lamest they could possibly be.
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In which case you succeeded.
Hey, I have this handwritten letter from Celestia explaining that you have to be knocked up for the sake of Equestria.
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I don't wanna but I guess I don't got much of a choice.
As opposed to doing blatantly dickish things like replacing birth control pills with sugar pills and not getting permission to knock them up. If I were them I'd be feeling fairly hurt, betrayed, and downright angry at Spike as would be 100 percent reasonable.
it has to be posted.
>smirking at Spike's ignorance as t.
-Something wrong with the end of that (incomplete) sentence ?
>aApart from cumming inside me... aAnd falling over all those times... aAnd fainting...
>oOr a week.
-Some weird errors there ?
I'm imagining Rainbow as Anko in this
not to long but could use an epilogue.
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I assume if celestial wanted them to know ahead of time she would have told them all at once in the first place.