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Big Macintosh suggests hosting a Brotherhooves Social this year to try and bring in a few extra bits, however Ponyville is somewhat lacking in brothers, and colts for that matter.

By request I have split the story into parts. This is not an extension of the story, just something to make it easier to read for some people.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 16 )

Holy fucking crap that was long! But...I'd be lying if it wasn't one on the best fanfics I've read in a long time. This was so well written, emotional, the comic timing and jokes were so tight and worked so well that you could pass it off as a Swiss watch, the characters stayed in character and the way they played off each other was brilliant and not to mention the OC's were funny and likable. Northstar and Cosmo stole the show, because their dialogue was funny, yet endearing and the way they played off other characters was fantastic.

Most people write stories that feel more like skits or like short stories from a book. You on the other hand wrote a whole damn episode and if you didn't tell anyone it was a fan creation they'd probably think it was canon and that is the greatest compliment I can give to you. Aside from it having a bit more innuendo than a real episode but it still felt genuine. Like what would happen if this was on Cartoon Network and bumped up the writing to a teen level.

What's left to say, it's easily worth five stars and anyone who says otherwise can go to hell.

Peace Out and Thank you.

Very well done! I enjoyed this one.:ajsmug:

I'm a fan of the Apple family, and you handled them extremely well.

The story was well-written, conscious of its relationship with the story Sisterhooves Social, and a good variation.

You did well; thank you for writing it!

:eeyup:

I agree 100% with thewaffler. I am have expecting for another fanfic like this one next week, it is that similar to the show. Great work!

Man, what an awesome story. Like Waffler said this could've easily passed for an actual episode of the show.

Hope to see this on the EQDaily some day.

Added to my queue, but 12k is tough to read in one sitting. Any chance this can be split in chapters?

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I have split the story. Hope that makes it easier to read for some.

4.8 star + :eeyup: = :pinkiehappy:

This is the best one part pony story I've ever read. The only other fic like this I can think of that compares is Sweet Apple Capers. You, sir, have captured what makes the show great flawlessly. :pinkiehappy:

5/5

THIS BETTER GET A FREAKING SEQUEL!

I really enjoyed this! (Especially Luna bellowing "INDEED BIG SISTER!" at the end! :rainbowlaugh: )

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I don't think it needs a sequel b/c everything basically ties up neatly at the end, but...what it could use is another episode, because that's essentially how this is written. Think of it as Fan canon AU "Fanon" if you will, really good Fanon that skews into an alternate 1985, alternate to the mainstream but canon for everyone else.

P.S. That's a lot of pressure people are putting on this author.

simply amazing :D well done sir! :pinkiehappy:

I really don't understand that, Cheerio means goodbye, and even then nobody says it here. *britrage over*
Smart story though apart from that :)

Very touching, was hoping that Big Mac would eventually buck the stallion that was infatuated with Applejack. You know, the whole big brother thing.

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