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Starwind Dood


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Snips and Snails pester Twilight to teach them magic, so Twilight suggests they enroll at Celestia's School for Gifted Unicorns in Canterlot. Their parents are less than thrilled by the idea. Will they get in and realize their dreams of becoming great magical ponies?

Warning: Contains OC parent pony ramblings.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 17 )
#2 · Oct 30th, 2011 · · ·

:unsuresweetie:It's long

#3 · Oct 30th, 2011 · · ·

:rainbowlaugh::flutterrage::trixieshiftright::derpyderp2::fluttershbad::raritycry::rainbowhuh::ajsmug::ajsmug::ajsleepy::ajsleepy::ajsleepy::applecry::applecry::applejackconfused::applejackunsure::coolphoto::derpyderp1::fluttershysad::fluttershbad::flutterrage::fluttercry::derpyderp2::pinkiecrazy::pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

#5 · Oct 30th, 2011 · · ·

:fluttershyouch::fluttershbad::fluttershyouch::fluttershbad::fluttershyouch::fluttershbad:

Very cute, great OCs, really good read. It could use a paragraph or two of epilogue. Keep writing! <3

#7 · Oct 30th, 2011 · · ·

This is a great story and I enjoyed it. I am opposed to the moral of the story, but still enjoyed the story itself. javascript:smilie(':coolphoto:');

Just wait until the future when Snips and Snails take a level in badass. Then we'll see what they're really capable of. :pinkiehappy:

A pretty good OC fic.
My final score was 3.5/5.
The content is great, but it suffers from some strange word usage, grammar mishaps, a couple of spelling errors, and a few tense problems.

Also, I wish we had gotten the scene where Herbs sees Lendsy again. :pinkiehappy:

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21030 eh... no, it isn't.

Cute story! Twi might learn a thing or two from that pair! :twilightsheepish:

It's so cute! I really like Snips and Snails now :pinkiesmile:

#13 · Nov 4th, 2011 · · ·

21030:facehoof:I wanted to know what happened to the parent at the end!

Simply amazing. ^///^

Very sweet. I like their parents too.

A sweet little one-shot that really makes you feel good, great work! :derpytongue2:

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