Somewhere in Asia, a boy liked the internet so much that he almost became obsessed with it. . one afternoon as he is browsing the net he found an interesting show
"My Little Pony, Friendship is Magic" Curious he watched it all and all. . just like other pony fan he became to love the show. . wishing to be with the ponies. .
days later the boy gets the sword that his father gave him before and practices at the training ground.. . as he is practicing he accidentaly hits an invisible wall, a crack suddenly appear and hears singing inside of hit. Then one night while he's outside he got hit by a truck tossing him 5 meters nearly dying at the fall while his sword got stabbed at the crack when he tries to retrieve the sword he suddenly got hit by lightning...
His journey then begins. . . and learns about his past . . . about his father. . . and how his father saved that world of total destruction. . .a secret that he never knew. . . and to solve the disappearance of Rainbow Dash
Lol.
i like it xD
hope this could be real =)
Well, this explains partially what the origins are of the plot effects in your later story. (which unfortunately I read before this)
the story line is ok if abrupt and too sudden.
However your language useage and general grammar is poor.
I understand that English is not your first language, but that doesnt make the text any less of a (//tiny.cc/PAIN) to read.
you can get better! do so, you have a lot of potential
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39330 i should have made the last one part 2 in the first place huh?