“I WISH… EVERYONE WOULD JUST, GO AWAY!!!” Mandy said, making her wish come true. The lamp of Grim’s mother shines a bright green glow and blasted a ray towards the sky, making everyone on the face of the earth disappeared in a blink of an eye, finally… Grim, Grim’s mother, and Billy were the last ones to disappear, leaving Mandy alone in Endsville.
Now Billy, and Grim end up on a place... which probably the two might love, or destroy in the process... which ever comes first...
(Image by Kyle Dunn)
I don't know... the crude stylization of the cartoon really doesn't offer any leeway for an author to make a literary adaptation in an effective manner. The end result seemed a tad clunky in my eyes, but I would blame that more on the source material than your writing skills.
Even so, this could seriously benefit from an editor regardless.
A nostalgic cartoon of my childhood....with PONIES?
...you have made me the happiest man on earth. YOU DESERVE A MEDAL.
before i even start reading i know Pinkie is going to love Billy
So going to track this!
EDIT: Then I realize it's only one chapter :(
Nice one shot me gusta.
This was interesting...
Oh man... that was one weird story... but that didn't mean I didn't enjoy it!
Oh and the ending where they end up in the Pokemon World... perfect!
Great story love the comedy. But i think you could have made it a full length story about Grim and Billy living in equestria instead of a oneshot. Still this was a very amusing story loved it.
723939 I could.. but I just made it like a one episode of it on the show... Just like one episode... you know
I know everypony especially dash is gonna beat up billy
WHY DID THIS SHOW AND ED EDD N EDDY HAVE TO END
Woohoo.
If it wasn't 1 Am and I had sleep within the last 24 hours and I wasn't sick I could probably
come up with something interesting to say.
Even with the funky grammar, that was one interesting story. I remember that show.
This would be so much better if it was animated... though I somehow doubt it would ever be done. I think maybe the Grim Adventures of Billy and Mandy doesn't translate well to the written word. Love the idea, though.
signed the good dr.
Dear mother of God. You have just created one of the most beautiful fics I've ever read.
You my good sir, are a boss.
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No offense ment, But are you foreign? The grammer sort of hinted English wasn't your first language.
Good story though, I liked it almost as much as I love coffe, I fucking love coffee.
728900 well I did learn other language but, english...yeah I keep flunking it...
733798 Ah, I mean no offense though
746055 sure sure
w...t...f...
mmmm chicken
Errors fixed. Will email you it later.
~G
Now they're in the pokemon world
Wow. You actually got down the humor and atmosphere of the source material perfectly to where it could be a short episode on it's own. The nostalgia... This was like the inverse of Double Rainboom plus improvements.
Fun Fact - Berfore FiM existed, it was canon that Grim was a brony.
5326652 definitely.... saw that episode and I was like "Whut?!" Lolololz
OMG!! :))) the story was so amazing :))) i wish i had finished it ^^ :)) but i love it ^^ :))