It is the day Celestia dreads the most... Courtship day. The day where countless nobles and commoners alike come to try and woo the Princess of the Dawn. Will she, however, find a surprise?
Half Wit is your average half witted pony. He just moved to Ponyville and is still trying to get situated. His arrival causes chaos in the small town as he has never had anything but bad luck...until he meets a certain gray mare named Derpy...
On one occasion, she had tried eating a rapper. When she bit his hair, she was confused to find the taste not matching that of the muffin. As she took a second bite, she pondered why. Was it a different flavor? As she thought, she was informed that there is, in fact, a difference between wrappers and rappers. The more you know.
This Story is so stupid... This kind of story is the special Kind of bad, caused not by the author being bad at writing, this is what happens when a good author deliberately set out to write something bad, and succeeded. Good show sir, I wasn't using those braincells anyway.
6298445 Fun fact: Of the three I've reviewed, this one was the least weird. Just let that sink in. That means less mental torture, so you might win on principle
Which story was I talking about? I don't remember talking about a story.
Also, I don't think my edits saved.
And, interesting method to bring it up to 1,000 words. Seems like you decided to add more dramatic laughter in after I pointed out how creepy it was.
I'm so reading this out loud at your birthday party, by the way.
That ending was a My Immortal reference, wasn't it?
"...you gave PikaBlue one of your "Super Special Amazing Cupcakes" didn't you, Pinkie?"
"No way, silly filly! Why would I do anything like that?"
"Oy."
I see absolutely no problems with this story and acknowledge it as a masterpiece of grammar, character development, and moving plotlines.
Da heck did I just read?
I might need to make a WTF folder for this.
Whoa... wait.
I guess I should have taken the warning to heart.
6113364 So thats what was in the cupcake
6113159 My immertle is tha beest hary pktter fic ans evry onr knoes it prepz dont even matter goffik 4ever
6112410 it all makes sense now /\
D'ya ever think Derpy's the only sane one in a world full of creeps and drama queens?
6117199 thats what I'm going for
6117224 First the reference, then the entire plot?
fuck niggah im fuckin psychic or some shit
Pfft, you spelled Light Yagami wrong.
Maybe she should try Eminem flavor?
There are many things I loved about this (short but good) chapter:
1) MLG Celestia FTW
2) The Death Note Reference
3) Relationship Troubles
4)
I welcome our new master-of-fiction-writing overlord!
Can NOT read that without having the image of...
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... Ram itself into my brain like a railroad spike being driven into my ear with a muffin shaped brick!
6117363 ssssssssssssshhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
This Story is so stupid... This kind of story is the special Kind of bad, caused not by the author being bad at writing, this is what happens when a good author deliberately set out to write something bad, and succeeded.
Good show sir, I wasn't using those braincells anyway.
6120917 *Bows*
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6112403 oh god no
I just added this to a random story contest. Thought it might just work.
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6122844 i'm scared
6122845 You should be. You wouldn't mind if I ranted about things in a PM to you, would you?
6122853 no, thats fine
My chapter just get shorter and shorter.
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6122842 As a judge for the Random Fanfic Contest: Da fuck did I just read?! It was funny, whatever it was.
6296726 thank you.
I feel the brain cells melting... HALP!
Can I die now? I believe my brain already has.
6296828 no! You still haven't finished judging the competition!
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6296851 so how are you?
6296858 Good, aside from slowly dying from the sheer randomness of these stories. You?
6296890 good! I'm currently returning from bronycon.
6298445 Fun fact: Of the three I've reviewed, this one was the least weird.
Just let that sink in.
That means less mental torture, so you might win on principleThis was so crazy I couldn't stop laughing!
NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!
When are you going to write more? Are you going to write more? Don't you dare tell me "NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!"