Red is an orphan who was raised by Princess Luna after he ran away from his original home, north of Canterlot. He suffers heavily from insomnia, and spends most days avoiding the other Canterlot ponies. They treat him -differently- than most other ponies.
Fayla, the coffeeshop owner down the street from his flat has been the only pony other than Luna he has held a conversation with.
WIll he gain her trust, and will he find out more about his past?
best story i ever read
Keep up the good work. I will certainly wait for more
"*Knock* *Knock* a visitor interrupted his recuperation"
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Instead, put it in context, like this: His recuperation was interrupted by a pair of short knocks on the door.
Also, I saw the word 'hands' somewhere toward the beginning.
Other than that, great work.
i love it more plz don't make me use sad pony pic
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If you're serious, then thanks man! That means a lot
Part Two will be published in a few days, so be on the look out
Hmm, This Red reminds me of my own OC, Red Dawn. Of course, My Red is different.
I like this story, it's got some good shit going for it. Keep writing my good man
amazing start to a potentially amazing fic!
Whoa, where did this dissappear too?
Anyway it's good to have it back
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thanks, trying to find my footing in the fanfiction world again :)