Midnight's Origin Story, Definitely Will Try And Rewrite This In The Future
Midnight Blitzer. A colt born in a world full of peace. But that peace was soon to be shattered within a short amount of time. Sensing the winds of war, Midnight is sent into military school, and soon, the army, to perfect his skills and if necessary, protect Equestria from any threat that may besiege it.
Villains come and go. From the legend of Nightmare Moon to the notorious Legion of Doom. And over the years, Midnight will try to prove himself, try to prove that he can be helpful, that he can be useful. That everything he gave up and lost wasn't for naught.
And thus everything would come crashing down upon hearing just four words.
"Peace In Our Time."
Arcs:
Arc: Calm Before The Storm (Childhood)
Chapters 1 +
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And so it begins...loved it! Eager to see how it will go.
Also, something I noticed
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Oof! Already an error has been noted.
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I am just very aware when reading
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Well it has been noted
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Glad i could help
Without even realizing it I’ve stumbled on another of your stories. I guess they just seem that good. Good story tho so far.
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Thanks. Right now finishing up The Equestrian Manhunt. Thanks for the fav
Lovely, just lovely!
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Thank you!
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You're welcome!
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what was your favorite part?
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The chess game
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Ah yes! Definetly! I will try to build some significance to that.
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My Little Reviews & Feedback I review your story.
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Ah alright! I'll check it out!
And btw since I've read reviews or other stories I know that right now the story isn't living up to it's tags yet. But it'll change in the future.
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ok.
nice work! And a lovely connection with Shining and your idea of Blitzer becoming a Royal Guard
Twilight’s adorkable as ever.
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what are your favorite moment
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His sister's baby talk at the start and the chess play
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Lightning Spark speaking uwu lol
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Mhm
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The part where Spike’s rolling on the floor laughing.
Good chapter, favorite part was Spike in general.
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Nice.
So do you find Blizzard interesting?
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She's okay, doesn't stand out too much yet.
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Other than the hawk mom and the ability to freeze ponies in their tracks
Nicely done and happy birthday!
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Woah! That was very quick! The power of emails really does help you.
Thank you.
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That and its lunch break right now. Youre welcome!
Kinda makes me wonder about that old idea of ours
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Ah the power of lunch break.
What idea?
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Colt midnight Meeting a Colt hanzal?
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Oh? I don't remember that conversation. Hm, I'll think about it. The story has a lot of things already planned so idk?
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No Problem, was just wondering.
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Alright.
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Though, if i remember correctly, you told once how midnight's life would change, with a war or something
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I would recommend that you cover that comment with the Sp (Spoiler) tag.
But yeah things will change for him.
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Done, and you said once that midnight could only met hanzal in the war
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Well maybe in that world or version of this world, but there's no real war here. The MLP timeline won't change much since Midnight is not the main character for part of the world. Twilight is.
He's just the main character in his life. Though tough times are going to come for him.
If Hanzal is incorporated into the story, then they'd meet as guards in training. But there's something I want to do and explain, and adding a foreign OC will making things more complicated. You see as time passes on
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Okay.
awesome chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter
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Thank you
Good to see more of Midnight and his family, hope to see him partake in the obstacle course eventually!
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When he finally learns how to fly, definitely!
Yeah with each chapter I post I hope to give more information about his family, who they are and how they acted.
nicely done!
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Thank you!
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you're welcome!
Nice to see an explanation for Midnight's name.
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Yep! I liked games like World of Tanks, World of Warships, War Thunder, etc for a time. My username was Blitz Armarda and that carried when I made Midnight.
Is there anything else you liked about the chapter?