Long ago, a brave hero banished a great evil, fighting along side an Alicorn. Now, a millennia later, a young boy must discover his destiny after being sucked into Equestria when the evil returns and threatens both earth and Equestria.
A brony that is into Steampunk
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a good start, try to add a bit more non-verbal dialog to match all the verbal stuff and try to get your chapter length between 2k and 5k. other then that i hope to see more of this story.
the description of this story reminds me of my oc, Drawing Sign, my first original character when I first joined the fandom. Odd.