What fills and soothes the soul will vary, but for me, I will not know until I try.
A stallion walks down a lone street with a piece of paper blowing into his face. Perhaps it's fate, dumb luck, or just a random circumstance, but the flyer lists a writer's guild being formed in Ponyville. Grammatical Error, as he calls himself, decides to take a shot in the dark about getting his story off the ground.
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although it feels like things are going on, the reader could be confused since nothing is in fact going on, at least in the sense of actual words.
this sentences feels off
i did spy a few other errors, mostly sentence structure, but these were the ones that made the least sense to me. all and all, i liked your story, but it was a bit lacking. i can get what you were possibly trying to do with your story, but you shouldn't have to "sacrifice" the story just to have your "lesson" shine in the end.
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Thanks for the input.
This was more or less a random, one shot story to clear my head. At the moment, I don't have any ideas for my Luna's Breakfast story, so I thought about making something a bit different. Challenged myself to write a story within a 24hr period of time.