Sweetie Belle was a troubled child. Her parents tried to convince her that it was her own fault, but she knows it’s not. It’s because of them.
Sweetie Belle had a big sister who she loved more than anything. But she had a sneaking suspicion that her sister didn't love her back. Eventually, her sister went away to school, and that was that.
Sweetie’s parents decide to send their daughter to Canterlot High. They tell her it’s so she can finally make some friends and be with her sister. She knows that’s not the reason. But why won’t they admit it?
At Canterlot High, everything appears to be normal. But things aren't as they seem…
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In the section where it tells you what characters are in the story, It says that Princess Luna is inside the story but not Princess Celestia, Was this a mistake or is it something else? By the way you are awesome at writing! You should defeneatly keep up with writing liturature gold like this!
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No, actually it's not a mistake. I can understand why you would think that, though. Celestia eventually gets Luna to be the dorm manager, and Celestia will just fade from the story entirely.
Oh okay, got it
dude, buttons a playa
well......that happened. can i suggest maybe going back through the previous chapters and drop some hints or something? that way it's not quite so sudden.
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Great idea! I'll do that.
Giving hints about the Sailor Guardians never ONCE crossed my mind. Heh. I'm such an idiot.
5992700 nah, you'r not an idiot. your just the writer. things that are obvious to you just aren't so obvious to us. you were planning to put this in, so you knew it was going to happen. we did not. it's all a matter of perspective. maybe just have her notice AB and Scoots run off a couple times for no apparent reason, have her see them acquire 'mystery injures,' and maybe see the cat around once and a while. spaced out, of course. no need to make it super obvious. just sprinkle them in enough to let the reader know that something is going on with them, but no clues as to what, other than having her see the cat. and make sure she describes it the way you did in this chapter. really knowledgeable readers will get the reference, while the rest won't. then instead of having her see it for the first time, she can recognize it as the cat she saw slinking around the dorms once and a while.
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Alright. Thanks for the tip!
Who wouldn't be obsessed with romance? The romance in real life is way funnier then those on tv or fanfi-- wait..
Wow, that was random xD
I like this, like how you dropped some hints and stuff, for instance when Scoots and Bloom came home late (early, uhh..?)
I've never watched Sailer Moon though.. Might watch some episodes now!
Button Mask?
Wow, great alias!
Almost as great as Danny Phantom