(He/They) Sometimes you just want to hear your favorite story told a little different
The mane six's plan to retrieve their cutie marks fails but luckily they have some alias that will risk everything to help them out.
For EQD's Writer's Training Ground The prompt was
Prompt 2: The Mane Six have failed to liberate the ponies from Starlight Glimmer's grasp. Can Sugar Belle, Double Diamond, Party Favor, and Night Glider save the day by themselves?
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Okay, I'm gonna make a pros and cons list about this story. Please do not be offended. I'm giving you constructive criticism.
First, the cons.
CONS LIST:
The last time I checked, she never said that in the episode. Nice touch, though. But still.
Me reading this line: I wonder what will happen...
Risky alert.
YOU DON'T EVEN CARE IF YOU GET KILLED OR SOMETHING?!
We're all so surprised.
Say what, now, Double D?
Also, this was really rushed. Take the time to slow down.
Also, this doesn't seem like a Slice Of Life fic. Slice Of Life means normal, everyday things. Take the time to also change the tags.
PROS LIST:
This story was really good. Despite all the cons, I really liked it. This is worthy of a fave.
I hope these pros and cons helped you!
Actually I really liked it I love this alternative on The Cutie Map with the four ponies saving the Mane 6 and standing up to Starlight, don't stop now, things were just getting good, do more! do more!