You may want to consider getting an editor, but otherwise I am happy with the update. Took forever though. . .

7512917 I agree

Thank you for the update, but maybe get someone who can change your sentence or rather the grammar so it fits better.

I mean thre are some words like "hear", where you probably tried to say "here".

I think I'm bad at grammar, and even I noticed it, which is why I think you should probably only get help for the grammar part (editor)

7512917 ya school and work kind got in the way and if you know a reliable editor send them my way ive been looking and ever on i get quiets on me

7517988 Aye, if I find one I will tell them you need help.

7518466 thank you