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Davidism
I write novels about crime, fantasy, and the supernatural. Sometimes, I write about ponies... is for fun!
Davidism
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liking the idea so far. starting off intresting for a hie. And i can never get enough of rainbow based stories.
Seriously loving this. Your dialogue is spot on, too.
By the way, I totally caught on to the self-inserts. David Devere? And isn't Lee Morgan your smut pseudonym?
Ah, good times!
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I'm horrified that you know about that.
Replace all uses of the word "waive" with "wave".
You ninny. Otherwise, a good read.
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I knew I shouldn't have let my editor read this while drinking.
GODDAMN!
EDIT: I fixed the waives before anyone was drowned.
need MORE give ME more
I just want to say, thanks to everyone that has favorited, and liked this story. It means a great deal to me.
This is awesome so far, and looks like it's going to get better!
Hmm, lets see what happens.
....that word count....
How did you get a lerfect 4,000 for both chapters!?
Probably careful word counting.
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It wasn't just careful word counting, it was also careful plot planning. I wanted to end it with her answering the phone, so I planned ahead to end it just as she said, "Yeah?"
I don't normally care about exacting word counts, but I thought it would make for an interesting experiment for this story, since, I'm taking my time with this one, and diving deep into the lives of its main characters.
Thanks for reading.
Well lets see what happens.
Rainbo! I nid u!
Yes, you r my ass.
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Oh my fucking god, I've got typos!
*** breaks fingers with a pipe-wrench ***
That'll teach me to do that again!
Now, how am I gonna write chapter three?
5274400 Ah shit.
Sorry everyone, looks like I unintentionally broke the author's fingers. Now he'll have to use the Speech-to-text functionality. Expect a whole lot of strange words for next chapter.
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No worries. I missed a few fingers, so I can still type.
5268405 You are now going to be know as the God of fiction, wear that title with pride! Bear the burden such title entails! Live your life to the fullest! Subway, Eat Fresh! I'm Loving it!
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That's very kind of you, thank you.
Oh NO!
Somepony go tackle Maud!
Curiouser and curiouser! I can't wait for your next chapter!
Man, I really like this story. From the stories I've read this is a fresh take on HiE stuff, and I'm digging it. Keep it up!
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That's very kind of you. Please spread the word.
Super interesting. Hopefully we don't lay on the human hate too hard though.
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Of course not. I'm a firm believer in the, "Humans aren't bastards" philosophy. We're just odd, and difficult to understand.
I really like this story, Davidism keep it up you've got talent!
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Some humans are bastards, some however are pretty much saints. Most are varying decrees of indifferent, so I'd say as a whole, humanity is chaotic, more than anything else.
Talking for hours on end with a pony over an inter-dimensional phone line...
I wonder what that looks like on his phone bill.
I find myself really enjoying this series. I couldn't find any grammar or spelling mistakes so that the end of my critic contribution, keep up the good work.
WHY THE FUCK DID HE NOT HANG UP IMMEDIATELY LIKE A NORMAL HUMAN.
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Lee is anything but run-of-the-mill, normal. Besides, if he hung up, there wouldn't be much of a story.
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I'm waiting...
Sir Perceval? One of Arthur's knights? Now the plot thickens. Celestia knows of them and will more than likely be interested in learning of this contact.
Ok, definitely liking this story thus far. Seemed kinda generic-y to me at first, so had it on the back burner for a few days, but very pleased once I finally started. Love stories with good character development, and you got this in spades. (though admittedly, Lee did seem strangely calm for just meeting alien life, huh well, not a major issue. Hopefully that's explained later. =3) Anywho, very much liking this story, and can't wait to read more.
She's waiting for a call from her potential special someh'yoomen.
Still, Sir Perceval almost killed Celestia? Bad. Ass.
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Lee Morgan is admittedly inspired by the character Richard Castle, and my own twisted personality. As such, he openly longs for and relishes the unknown and the possibility of the supernatural. He would proudly wear a shirt that reads, "I survived an alien anal probe, and all I got was this T-shirt."
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I was worried that the introduction of something Arthurian into Equestria history would be too over the top, which is why it's only a story by Star Swirl. The details of Sir Perceval's appearance will remain forever a mystery. Though we all know it had something to do with him stealing Merlin's grimoire, and sort of having tunnel-vision on finding the grail.
5299799 So he really is ruggedly handsome?
5299819 If someone thinks it's over the top, remind them this is about someone calling Equestria on a cellphone.
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You just made my day, and probably my weekend, too. lol!
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I guess writing crime novels gives a guy a little bit of a mental edge when people are acting strangely. (And believe it or not, this isn't the first story I've read with that premise.)
5299834 He's gotta be Ruggedly Handsome. After all, if he's based on Richard Castle, then he's at least partially based on Captain Malcolm Reynolds, and Nathan Fillion himself is a Very Ruggedly Handsome man. So, there. Proof of Handsomeness.
Noooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!! I hate catching up to the latest chapter of really good stories! Hurry before I lose valuable second on my timer! ! ! I don't wanna explode from anticipation.
I have a hunger that only stories can satisfy.
For the eighth chapter you should have 8888 words... You know, for the lulz.
Judging by the rating of this story she is most certainly expecting a package... Hopefully a pretty hefty one at that.
I am now caught up and eagerly awaiting more. Great story so far, and I love the name-calling matches you made with Lee and Dash, not to mention the occasional - and very well done - innuendo here and there (eating Ditsy...
). Also, "With popcorn." Priceless. I can totally hear Maud saying that. Oh, and lastly, nice nod to Xenophilia! 
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You have no idea how much that means; thank you so very much. I'm thrilled that the nuances I inserted were caught, and so well received. I'm half way through the next chapter, so you won't have to wait much longer.
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I plot the progression carefully, then when I hit thirty-five hundred words, I start tapering the chapter to a close. It only gets hairy at the last twenty or so words.
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To be honest, no. I usually aim for at least four thousands words per chapter. The first chapter was more or less an accident, and I wanted to try and do it again. It may sound gimmicky, but it makes the story unique.
So, um, how's chapter 6 coming?
Down in the drink... Due to beaned by rock? Damn, his luck can be quantified as awesome of terribly painfully.
I love that Rainbow thinks the best way to test out the pool is to peg the rock as hard as she can. Next chapter is going to be very interesting