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sexy, well written stuff.
It just seems Citrine was just thrust in out of nowhere. But, for shameless clop, its good.
Femdom Celestia....my prayers have been heard.
I like the story but I just dont.
Celestia I know it is a good femdom.
But if that would happen (when she gives him away) than I know for a fact that celestia never
loved him when she gives him away
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I'm sorry? I don't quite understand what you're trying to say; it's like every sentence got cut in half.
Not usually into human x pony stuff, but this was a fun read.
Well done
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I was afraid if I spent too much time getting Citrine into the palace the work would lose momentum, so I decided to start things in media res, so to speak. A longer fiction would have allowed a more detailed and nuanced introduction of him to the world and culture, to say nothing of Celestia's seduction of him, but for the purposes of keeping it within the commissioner's budget I thought it best to just jump in.
But, I agree, if I had more words I would have expanded that section.
The pegging killed the entire story for me.
This needs a sequel
"citrine"???????
That totally killed my immersion, sorry boii.
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You should continue this or make a sequel
Well done.
A very cute story. Quite a few typos, but not too bothersome. While self contained, it definitely leaves room for a continuation. Personally I'd like to see a day in Citrine's life after these events. Will he have guy friends? Will he have a job or be a stay-at-home-husband? All this and more deserves to be explored.