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Description:
By just glancing at this description, I can tell you hate grammar.
I would make some corrections, but that would just take a very long time.(Basically re-writing the description entirely.)
Character Count: Good. No short/choppy chapters.
By what I have just read so far, I'm not all that excited to review the rest of your story. You also may want to correct a lot of errors in your description.~ Silver Spoon
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I appreciate the honesty, it was more a case of it had just gone 2am, I didn't know what to write for a description and just wanted to get a first draft uploaded. Lazy on my part but I cared more about the story than the description, though I do see how that could put people off reading any further so will work on it.
If no one tells me what I'm doing wrong/where I need to improve I'm not going to learn.
Oh god XD. That Gilda pic. I. NEED. AIR XD.
furseiseki, the artiest is furseiski. In fact, here's a link to the artwork. Link.
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Thank you :3
My googlefu had failed, will update the info accordingly.
Are you going to make more chapters???
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Maybe, hopefully. Initially I was planning on making more chapters, but couldnt decide whether to make them sequential or just have one off standalones... then real life got in the way, not really got much free time to write lately D: