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Davidism


I write novels about crime, fantasy, and the supernatural. Sometimes, I write about ponies... is for fun!

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Struggling musician Howard Hall's only wish, is to be the best performer in the world, and when that one wish gets granted; things will never be the same again. Two music masters from the world of Equestria appear and take Howard as their star protege, and vow to make him a master. There's just one problem: they're ponies.

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Comments ( 13 )

Well this looks to be an interesting amusing story. Looking forward to reading more.

A pony...eatting meat....AWESOME!!!:rainbowlaugh: Vinyl is a laugh

Lol. Vinyl and Octavia eating a cheeseburger. :rainbowlaugh:

Wow. I just want to thank everyone that gave this a look, and favorited it. I know the subject is a dicey one, and a lot of readers may be put off by the idea of ponies on earth. I simply wanted to approach this from a different view-point. Rather than just have the humor and comedy rest with the human, stuck with ponies; have ponies stuck with a human, and a "fish out of water" experience.

For those that perhaps think this is a story with a lot of "telling", well... it is. I'm a story-teller, it's what I do. It's swiftly paced, and has a ton of scene changes. I'm foregoing the benefit of a lot of description because I want the reader to fill in those blanks for themselves, and imagine what they want. In time, as the story progresses, I'll get to more elaboration on things like, hair color, eye color, or even what our tormented chap, Howard Hall looks like.

For right now, I'm just happy everyone has given this a chance, and is willing to go along for the ride, that I've chosen to take.

If anyone has any problems with the grammar, or punctuation; then you'll no doubt notice a few typos here and there. Words that skip right pass the spell-check, and my eyes. But, don't sweat it too much; this is a first draft, and has no corrections. You're getting it pretty much as I wrote it (except for the addition of one or two lines of dialogue for clarification).

Once again; thanks to everyone that has marked this as a favorite, and to all those that support this romp.

I love your story so far!

omg now that was funny the last part was the best:twilightblush::twilightoops::rainbowderp:

Lol,thats really all i can say

Comment posted by That-Weeb deleted Mar 19th, 2016

This looks amusingly entertaining... just... one question...

...This doesn't have a Octyl (Or whatever) ship, does it?

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Uh... no, not really. Anything they've had together was in the past, or was/is nothing more than a mild occasional, thing.

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Anything they've had together was in the past,

...So... they were a thing...

...eh, better than is.

Gingerly turning the knob, and opening the door to the bedroom, Octavia sucked in air quickly as she saw Howard's music room. From top to bottom, it was lined with guitars, keyboards, amps, drums, music stands, straps, what seemed like thousands of feet of cables, and enough recording gear to make a studio. Octavia wasn't sure why, but the sheer overwhelming array and assortment of musical instruments made her want to swoon, and gave her a slight twang of heat in her lower parts. She couldn't believe it, but she was actually being turned on by what she was seeing.

"Who is this guy?" Octavia said, as Vinyl Scratch walked in the room.

"Beats me—holy shit!" Vinyl instantly slumped to the floor, and twitched visibly. "I think I just came."

That is a completely funny line you have just earned a reader here.

Question,is this story dead?

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